Appeal To Reason - Comments

AHHHHHHH I'm so close to going back to re-read everything but I'm desperate for an update. Here's to hoping you update soon! <3

I needed an update on this, like, last month. Here just to softly prod you to update soon :)

I NEED AN UPDATE LIKE I NEED AIR D:

Okay, so over the past couple days I read this entire story. I did read the first couple chapters then stopped for some reason, and boy, am I happy that I decided to read this again! This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read on here. I am absolutely in love with the way your show the character's thoughts and emotions. I really liked the encounter between Dany and Anna in the last chapter. Needless to say, I'm eagerly awating the next update! (:

I love love love this story. I love getting a mibba update with this link, it's better than christmas.

Okay so I got up to about Chapter 22 as a re-read when I saw that you had updated. Needless to say I skipped all the way to the new chapter haha. And I was not disappointed either. A little confused in the back and forth between Anna and Dany. I just need them to be happy again and I'm not quite sure if that's going to happen after they've both been through but I just want it. I hate that Dany never responded to her question, even though Anna let him off the hook; I feel like he should have responded to her, but that's just me.

I just wanted to say that I really love this story. I've been reading it since the first chapter was posted and it's probably my favourite story that I've read/am reading on here.

Wow yay they're working things out...I think (:
Awesome update :D

You should honestly see the huge grin that graces my face every time you update anything. So here I am at work in a Dany-induced giggle session, which oh my god, what is my life. Dany's reaction to her bare and white apartment was so depressing, thinking she'd tried to completely erase him from her life, and I guess she had, but the old him you know? This is a fresh start for everyone while using the past as a learning experience I think. I'm glad he opened up to her, told her about what he was feeling rather than leaving her guessing and scrambling for any sort of affection at all. Him opening up is really the biggest affection after all, don't you think?

Just, ugh, perfect. Maybe she didn’t know everything about me./Maybe I didn’t know everything about him.

And this as though this were a plea for me to let him feel at home in this place that was no longer his. (Irony would have it that he should feel strange being out of place in a home that never belonged to him in the first place.) 'Cause he feels at home with Anna, or he did, before everything blew up. At that just speaks volumes to how close he really let her get, to be honest.

Such a good update, as always. I'm so glad they're talking and trying to work things out. Honestly is always the best option, and I hope they'll be able to move past everything and become even closer and a more stable partnership, 'cause honestly we all know they've been one from the start. Cannot wait for more, dear! <3

I've been reading this story for ages!! Loved the update and cannot wait to read the next chapter

So here I am, sitting around, waiting for it to be midnight so that I can shower my best friend with "HAPPY BIRTHDAYS" when I get a notification that you updated.

You. Updated.

Can I just say how happy I am?! I read this story in literally ONE day, forgot to comment, and now here I am, giving you some half-assed comment.

Anyway.

I love the ending. Hell, I loved it all! But I especially loved the ending because of where you left it off.

"You painted everything."

Not exactly a cliff-hanger, but there's so much left that could be said. Therefore, it could be counted as a half cliff-hanger. Idk.

I'm super stoked for what you have next in store! I love your writing style, thank you for sharing your talent! :D

Always makes me smile to see an update for you!

I love this story so much

Keep up the amazing work!!!! :)

Finally caught up! School is a pain in the ass :P I'm so glad you updated. And that I got to read all the new updates at once :P As always, the chapters were amazing. Can't wait for more! :)

Aw, yay an update (: Can't wait to see what they talk about!
I love this story, and I'm glad you're continuing it :)

First I should apologize for being a slacker. I didn't want to quickly read it when you first posted it. I loved it so much I wante to savor it. (; Okay, now. Mrs. Birch sounds like a real peach, lmao. Must be nice to have that kind of money to throw around. I loved the little insight and nod to Anna's job. Being an interior designer sounds like a lot of fun--tons of pressure too--but still a lot of fun.

Ugh, Ryane on "babysitting" duty, so hot kill me now. I think that's all that needs to be said about that.

As far as I was concerned, the period of time after work was reserved for three things: Food, a distinct lack of pants, and the mindless consumption of whatever crack television show I could get my hands on soonest. This is the most accurate thing ever written, ever. The first thing I do when I get home from work is take off my pants, HAHAHAHA.

I hate you so much for cutting it off where you did, good lord help me, jesus take the wheel. “I was jealous.” Of what?! Ryane, it's Ryane isn't it? It would figure that the reason Ryane can't have her would be jealous of him, too. Son of a bitch. YOU KILL ME, you know.

So good, and I'm dying to read more. Literally dying, so you should probably update really soon, but you know I probably should too. Eff. Love you and miss you and erreythang. <3

I read all 32 chapters this afternoon/evening, and I have to say that this is probably one of my favourite stories here on Mibba. The way you were able to describe what Anna or Dany was feeling, it felt like I was actually them. Like I can't get over how well you wrote this!

I feel like Dany is some ways, that every word or action is so carefully calculated...like you can't let anything slip because then people will get to know you, the real you. You can only let people see a small glimpse of how you're supposed to appear. But sometimes I feel like Anna, that she held onto Dany so closely because he needed someone and she believed that she could be that someone. I've been in situations where I thought I could fix that person, that I gave everything but the other person didn't give anything in return.

Oh and this will probably sound really random, but I absolutely love the picture that you chose for the story banner. I feel like it perfectly matches what you describe Dany to be in your story. He's staring right at you, calculating his next move.

This is kind of one massive comment about the chapters you've posted so far; I feel like Anna used Mike kind of like how Dany used Anna. but I extremely happy that Dany took it upon himself to change..cause he realized how much Anna means to him. Can't wait to hear how Anna and Dany's 'talk' goes!

seriously, please keep writing...I feel like this may change my outlook on things (as cheesy as that sounds)

You updated, and it was perfect.

I'm still trying to work out my thoughts on this chapter. It was great, and I really liked the starting, where we got a little more insight into Anna's working life. I really hope Dany volunteers to go with her to pick up the granite heheh. But as for Dany and the second part of the chapter, you really blew me away.

Okay, so first off, since I haven't read the past couple of chapters in months, I'm going to assume that Dany is injured right? that is why he didn't go on the road trip? Anyways, I'm so glad she called, and I could almost see Dany's bewildered face as he took the call. I laughed when she decided to put on some pants before Dany got there (she totally should of left them off :P). Then Dany, what can I even say about this man? Anna isn't the only one that was surprised by his last line. I was shocked. Is he really going to go all the way back to the start and explain how he was jealous about her not wearing his jersey?

I also think you've done a fantastic job subtlety weaving the chorus of the song 'The Scientist' in to narrative. It's not obvious in any particular chapter, but when you look at the story as a whole, you really see how deeply related it is. I hope everything is going good on your end, and that you have a chance to updated soon.

so i just caught up on a good 10 chapters and really want to know what happens next!!