Blanket - Comments

Oh my gosh... Your a genius. Your writing is so creative and different.
I love this !!! It makes you think.

I liked this story. The concept of it was different, as I've never seen something similar on here.

I still sleep with a blanket I've had since I was a baby, and I don't think I could ever get rid of it. This story kinda made me think of that.

Good job.

I feel like you tell too much and not really show. And the character sounds very stale, and a bit...looney? I don't know if I ever had this fascination with a blanket. I used to with a Barney doll. Like when I thought there was a vampire in my closet, I would hold my barney doll and the vampire would go away. I was like eight, though. In this, I feel like it is an older girl speaking, but the narration doesn't match the plot. I don't really feel much sympathy for this character at all.

It also felt a bit rushed through :/

This is very simple. Yet very very lovely.
I think how used somthing so simple as a blanket and turned it into somthing completly different. nice work :)

I really liked this. Simple, yet effective.
I think it's more poetic, mind. As the main theme of it appears to be a metaphor, and some of the language used reminds me of poetry.
This works well as a story, but would be amazing if you wrote a similar poem, too =D

This was very wonderful. Simple but wonderful.

You've wonderfully captured her emotions on everything, I find.
The significance of the blanket is interesting I find, as her outlook on life is.
A really good read, I like it a lot. (:

You've wonderfully captured her emotions on everything, I find.
The significance of the blanket is interesting I find, as her outlook on life is.
A really good read, I like it a lot. (:

Aw. Deep, emotional, inspiring... Such a simple, sweet topic.
Kudos. c:

This is great, especially for you first one-shot. I really loved the line: "I'll live today and die tomorrow, but I'll know somewhere I belong."

This was absolutely breathtaking. I agree with your friend that it sounds almost like a poem, but it's still a story too. You should definitely do more one-shots =)

What's the kid from Charlie Brown? Linus? This is his story. :D
I thougt it was cute. I will never' look at my blanket the same way again. ^_^ <3

I really like this (:
It's short, sweet and to the point.
Great job :D <3

This is amazing.
I really liked it a lot!

This is an interesting way to look at a blanket. For many children a blanket represents safety, and I suppose that a cancer patient would view it the same way. Almost some desperate attempt to cling on to youth, to life.

I work to pay my hospital bills, and I pray that I well live but things only seem to get worse.
That should be will, not well. Justsayin'.

Well done (:

This was just... breathtaking.
Wonderful job. <3