Somewhere Weaknesses Are Strength - Comments

Hey,
I love the newest chapter!! It fantastic!! Keep up the good work!!
I love pirate Hayley, she's so cute.

I did adore this chapter. I loved how Seb thought about playing dead while holding back her tears for everyone she lost. I liked how Hayley argued with her crew mates about necrophelia; it honestly made me chuckle. It was a little glimpse of a softer side on a pirate captain, when normally they wouldn't care.
And I'm sorry this comment is probably all over the place and horrid, but I stayed up late and I'm about to catch some sleep. I promise I'll leave a better (and longer) comment next time. :]
Another good job. xoxo.

i love this :D Update soooooon!!!

Your writing is AMAZING ! :) Love it <3 <3

Ohhhh the excitment bubbles!!! love it :)

Great chapter!
Looking forward to the next! And also, in NO way at all was it to graphic. I also like Hayley as a bad guy!! I think its sexy >.<

P.S I am not really 30, I am way younger than that!!

First; it definitely wasn't too graphic, I believe it had just the right ammount. It was pretty fantastic!
I think this is my favorite chapter by far, also, I must admit I love Hayley as a bad guy. It is a little hard to imagine but you've sort of captured this bad-ass essence of hers and placed it down to the 'pirate' in her. Haha. I'm excited to see Hayley a little bit more mean and rough. :]
Second; I didn't notice any errors, so congrats! You wrote this beautifully and I wanted to hug it. Haha. Oh but poor Anne. I'm sure the images Seb (Yah, I gave her a nickname) saw will haunt her though, but I'm looking forward to seeing how she deals with that trauma. Especially now that she's captured and has a slight(?) idea of what's going to happen to her.

I hope you update again soon, I'm so excited to read the next one I keep making mistakes as I type this so I have to fix everything at least twice. Haha. :D
xox.

No problem :D

update soon

I don't know exactly, but I think Hayley's some type of bad guy. Like a robber, or a pirate. :D

I love your story!! Please update soon!!! And i have NO idea what role Hayley will play....

I'm a new reader, just came across and subscribed, but I already enjoy this. :]
I'm hoping Hayley has some role to play on the ship, though I have a feeling she'll be some sister/person in disguise at the ball or a servant that isn't paid much attention too. Either way, I think I'll love whatever role you'll put her in.
Also, for constructive criticism; You'll want to watch your spelling a bit more, because there are quite a few mistakes riddled about your chapters that some times interrupt the story-line but other times go mainly unnoticed. I love the detail you've included though, but I wish you'd describe some of the other characters physically a bit more, though you've done a great job so far!
Anyway, update soon and have a great day/night. xox.

She's a pirate!

Yeah. I'm right. (But probably not)

Lovely update!

So I think Hayley is on the ship and is part of some travelling music group or something. Because I'm cool and think that. ::)

I kinda just realized I'm not subscribed to this. This keeps happening with your stories.

oooh cant wait to see who comes :) Update sooooon

I love it!

idk what role Hayley should play....Maybe she's on the ship???

update!!!

well i like it a lot :) update sooooon

Lovely first chapter!

It seems really interesting.

But I'm still wondering why you deleted Tonight I'll Lie Awake as well?

this is so good ! i love this !

umm does hayley play..... ?

idk hahahh
great story hun

<3 frankie