This chapter made me want to hit Seb upside the head, I'm not sure why, it just felt like she caved too easily. Whether she got tortured or not, she just seems so unsure of herself and has seemed to resigned herself to the situation unlike when she first was thrown into it. Who knows (except you), perhaps when she arrives at Hayley's home she'll get that 'spunk' back to her and try to find some form of escape but accidentally fall for our lovely red head. haha. Anyway, I still liked your update, but a few spelling mistakes near the middle. :]
Sorry it took me so long to read and comment on your update, but it was a good one! A few spelling mistakes, but otherwise alright. I have a feeling Seb is going to end up giving in, and I doubt Hayley will actually rape her, but I hope to see Seb's mental and physical strength by not giving in and see what tricks Hayley has up her sleeve to "break" her. :]
Keep it up, 'cause I love the story <3 :D