May 20th, 2010 at 09:17am
I did adore this chapter. I loved how Seb thought about playing dead while holding back her tears for everyone she lost. I liked how Hayley argued with her crew mates about necrophelia; it honestly made me chuckle. It was a little glimpse of a softer side on a pirate captain, when normally they wouldn't care.
And I'm sorry this comment is probably all over the place and horrid, but I stayed up late and I'm about to catch some sleep. I promise I'll leave a better (and longer) comment next time. :]
Another good job. xoxo.
I love the newest chapter!! It fantastic!! Keep up the good work!!
I love pirate Hayley, she's so cute.