omgomgomgomgosjfldskjalajasdvkmsdomgomgomgomgomgomgoskdjalsdkfomgomgomgomgomgomgasldkjfalsdjflasjdvsjdflajf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aha :D I love it! Please update soon >.< :)
He should have realized sooner that Hayley wouldn't just give her up like that I mean, she didn't give her up to begin with and he should have known she wouldn't ever do this It seems like Hayley is ready to fight for Seb Seb looked like she was ready to jump him for his comments about her kingdom He definitley deserved this I mean, he didn't even seem to have remorse I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)
still loving this story! :) Thats one cliffhanger, please tell me there is a sword fight coming up. I think that'd be a wicked chapter. Update again soon~
HOLY FUCKING HELL WOAH BUDDY, WOAH. SERIOUS CLIFFHANGER. FOR REAL xD Okay that whole all-caps thing was kind of exagerated, BUT NO SERIOUSLY OMFG, I wanna know what happens!! :o AHHH. Intensittyyyy. I hope Hayley kicks his creepy, old, king-like, peadophile-ish ass :3
Ps. I forgot to to mention one tiny mistake I found in the chapter. "You're dresses are far more exotic than the ones our princesses wear, and they've got you beat on the bitchiness scale." -> i think you meant Your
Oh no....the plan couldn't even really be pushed into plan And the King knew that it wasn't the real 'lady of the house' And once he sees Seb he knows that Hayley didn't fulfill her contract That's gonna get some huuuuge trouble But I wonder how he exactly knew that Holly wasn't the right girl I really can't wait for more Hope you update soon :)