holy SHEISSE! that happens to me all the time! i'll be like, and the next chapter will be... wait where are we going with this? >.< anyway, yeah. i'm excited. :D
NOT GOOD? are you serious, woman?! that was lovely, and just absolutely adorable. :3 disjointed? not at all; it was flowy, actually. all your chapters are flowy, hahah. i like flowy. even if it's not an actual word... *ahem* ahhh. i know how reid feels. it's a horrible position to be in. D: and you're making me so excited for the next chapter! >3 i really wanna know what's gonna happen next. >O more soon? :3
Ahh, this story is so cute. (: How you describe Benji, makes me want to hug him into little pieces. I hope you update soon again, because I want to know what happened in Ohio with Benji. D:<
I think this is really the perfect pace. Not too fast, or too slow; just the right pace. I really love this story, it's so cute. Reid is just so sweet to Benji, it's adorable c: Anyways, great update, I'm very excited for the next!
WOOHOO! AN UPDATE! :D firstly, thanks for the update! ^-^ and the awesomeness of the update. that was just lovely. :3 i hate how phone calls ruin perfect moments, lol. ANYWAYYYY, the story's going at a lovely pace, so you should just take it easy. it's really well-written. x] i love how insecure reid is about his relationship with benji. i mean, it's so obvious that benji likes him back, but reid still can't believe it and stuff. i love how careful reid is when he's with benji, lol. he treats benji like some kind of diamond, or something. very fragile, but just beautiful and perfect in every way.
that was cheesy. LOL. ignore me. xD welllll. i can't wait for the next update! more soon? :3
YOU DON'T KNOW HOW LONG I'VE WAITED FOR THIS! -Goes Googley Eyed- Reid is so adorbale, as is Benji. I think your story moves at the right pace. Of course, I would like the updates to come quicker, but it's nice. Your characters aren't jumping into intimacy too quickly and I think it's rather cute. Keep up the good work. I'd be happy to read anything you have to write for this story. :D
Awwh, this was fuckin' adorable! I think its going at just the right pace. I'm anxious about the whole Carl thing though- i mean, he SEEMED okay with it, but y'know... two faced people.
I'm excited for the next chapters :D But take your time, i mean, there's really no rush. Its not like we will be seriously awaiting your update... ok, lie, but still. We'd survive if it was a ridiculously long amount of time before you had time to update-just barely- but survive all the same. :}
mwuahahaha i just found this and it's awesome >:D no, i actually think the pacing is fine. it's not too fast or being dragged out. you've allowed enough time for your characters
Aha, so is this is out of its unnofficial hiatus? Exciting. I think its moving at a reasonable pace, Reid and Benji are getting to know each other before they dive in... which is good because most of the shit out there gets the characters together in like, the 3rd chapter. I think you'd be okay if you sure things up a bit, the the pace right now is just fine.
Anyway I really liked this chapter. Pricilla is annoying because she tried to flirt with Reid, but other than her I like everyone else. :)