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  • neon memories

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    Oh. My. God! I love it! (I just read the last chapter you put up.) I love how you make Asher so sure of himself and adult, but make him so he's still so opposed to hurting others. :) And I love his knife. It sounds familiar though....odd. <confused look> Maybe it was in WPP. o.0
    And my, my, my, little Asher's certainly doing big things with magic! That little bit where they control the earth whith out actually touching it with their hands - it is VERY cool. ^-^
    Now you make ME want to be magic. :D
    Anyways, AHHHH!!!! I freaking love this! Write more soon? O.O :3
    March 2nd, 2011 at 04:25am
  • neon memories

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    The Water Specters appear to be much like the sirens of Greek mythology, no?
    March 2nd, 2011 at 04:12am
  • neon memories

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    Oh my. This is horrid. I can't even wait to finish the second chapter before commenting!
    I just wanted to say, I love how you don't make him a snotty, spoiled-brat, and you make the royal-family get a little dirt under their nails too.
    The healing thing is very interesting...why do I get this feeling like it's going to be a big part of the story?
    And also, if I could bend flowers like that (out of my natural curiosity - my best friend, Emma, says I'm worse than a cat in that aspect. :D ) I would definitely try and bend a flower into another flower. :D
    March 2nd, 2011 at 04:04am
  • neon memories

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    YES! YOU WROTE MORE!! Me and my blondness, I didn't know how to subsribe to a story seeing s when I was reading yours, I had just joined Mibba. But, oh my, I'm going to go read it now! Then attack you with comments, as is my custom. ^.^
    March 2nd, 2011 at 03:57am
  • yoamma

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    please don't stop updating! i'm waiting forever for you to finish!
    August 30th, 2010 at 03:57pm
  • blaqrican13

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    cant wait for more
    August 25th, 2010 at 02:43pm
  • xuanny

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    update soon!
    August 16th, 2010 at 06:55am
  • purplebutterfly0615

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    Yay :) I was sooooo excited when I'd seen you'd updated! I love reading these things in the mind of asher. That part you wrote about how he felt their emotions when they transferred color is a cool piece of information. Makes me wonder... lol
    August 14th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • BeautifulAbomination

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    He could carry me through the trees any time.
    :D
    August 7th, 2010 at 07:25am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    EEEEEEEEEEEK It's like Christmas in August!!!!!! Two of this in one day, and then I read teh three chapts of the Boy from the Stars and am like, COOOOOOL!!! and subscribed, and then went back to your page to see that you had updated this again, and I'm like HOLY BEJEEZUS ITS HEAVEN!!

    And yes, I'm still hyper.

    Loved the updates, and I freaked out for about a millisecond when Asher stabbed himself, but then I realized it was the same dagger he'd leant to Erin and therefore would not harm teh person using it ^^
    August 7th, 2010 at 02:19am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    EYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!
    I have to check the subscriptions page, because I popped by your page to look and it said you'd updated this today and I freaked out but then decided to be rational and went to my email...where there wasn't a story update notification. So I'm like, screw the notification!!! And so I clicked, and read, and was all like HOLY COW ITS JUST AS AMAZING AS EVER!!! And now I'm wondering what Asher has gotten into with the Goblins...hm...
    I eagerly await more...and I might just have to check out your other story...^^
    UNTIL NEXT TIME! (No, I'm not - might be - a little - a lot - hyper - crazy - both.... XD)
    August 7th, 2010 at 01:00am
  • tmwall

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    eeeeee! I honestly squealed when I saw you had updated! And updates on Boy from the Stars too? BEST DAY OF MY LIFE! :D
    August 6th, 2010 at 08:23pm
  • violetriddle

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    You are the best writer I have found on here, no offense other peoples.
    August 6th, 2010 at 07:56pm
  • emraldae

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    this is amazing.... I love it...
    i love your writing!
    I cant wait for more :D made my whole day to see you'd updated
    August 6th, 2010 at 09:33am
  • violetriddle

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    Wow, you already have a lot of comments... I like your stories, cause they are awesomer than gosomer... I don't know what that is, it rhymed though...
    July 29th, 2010 at 01:21am
  • xuanny

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    i love this chapter. supper excited to know what asher thinks of erin's actions :D
    July 28th, 2010 at 03:53am
  • ktbkrayz

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    Hey girl!

    WHERE ARE YOU?!?!?!

    Haha so I have missed updates from you so much! Hopefully this one will being going full speed soon! I can hardly wait :D
    June 20th, 2010 at 09:10am
  • wanderingballoon

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    Hey everyone I just wanted to let you know that while I am in Massachusetts on summer vacation I won't be bale to work on this story because I left everything for it at my home. I am, however, working on another story called "Help! I'm Housing a Hero" while I am here.

    Feel free to read it. I won't be back home until July 18. I am sorry and I hope you guys can wait that long. I promise I will make it up to all of you!
    June 19th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • GreenEyedVengeance

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    when are you guna start????
    June 19th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • redisforremembrance

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    Is there any chance that you could update sometime? thanks!
    June 10th, 2010 at 05:23am