The Search for the Lucky One - Comments

When's this one start?

I love WPP, and I love this too!
It's really cool to see Asher's POV, can't wait for the next chapter!
I really hope WPP will get published, and if it will, I'll try to be the first to buy :]
*Subscribing*
Keep up the fantastic work you always do!

genuinely witness protection program was THE best story ive read on here, no joke!
cant waaaiittt for this one to take off, gonne be interesting to see things from the prince's POV like his reaction to the girls at Erin's school, im so excited!
did someone say books in stores?! if so i am BUYING that!
love love love to this story, keep it up yess?? :)

1 chapter. 1 MEASLY chapter. 1 measly AMAZINGLY STUPENDOUS chapter, but still. 1 chapter. MORE MORE MORE! can you (pretty please with all your favorite things including rainbow sprinkles and a purple gummy bear on top) write some more? pleeeassseee? ok. enough begging.

This is really good. I love how you already have the confusion with the blushing and the need to be mature and prim and proper. You've definitely got the ball rolling. It's VERY good so far.

Maybe you should call it a pre-sequal. 'Cuz it's about before and after. lol... :D

I can't wait to see where this goes. Don't let it die, please!

story part 1 is finished. now moving on to story part 2. lls. can't wait to see Asher's thoughts on all of the different scenes

story part 1 is finished. now moving on to story part 2. lls. can't wait to see Asher's thoghts on all of the different scenes

Omg lol im like uber excited to get the book in stores =]
and of course read this one =] cant wait till you start updating this one =]
i have a questiong though... Do the purple flowers make her special pretty sword she was givin by the teacher?

holy cow, you guys. This story only has one chapter up and it already has 4 stars!!!!!! How exciting is that?

YEA!!! can't wait to read more. of course prince asher would act mature even at his young age. good so far, love it. one more day til monday when i can read the update!!!!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Enough said.
:)

Wow, it's good.
Keep going. But it's a pity that you aren't going further with the WPP.
I really liked that one, but reading it from Asher's point of view is different.
But i like it:)

OMG YAY!!!!!! i izz so happee! :D
like ahhh! so cute elfy boy all little and serious and stuff!
i wanna hug him!!!!! he's so darn cute :3
i can't wait to read the next chap!!!!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I had a minor freakout here. If you can't tell by my OMG-ness. Like, starting to squeal but then forcing it to catch in my throat so I won't get weird looks from the parents kind of freaking out. In other words, a good freakout.
So, liking it so far. And the magic balls! And the tracking stone! Has he already given someone part of the tracking stone so he can track them, or will he give it to a certain lucky girl...?
Random guesses =3
Already loving it, but I just wanted to say that a couple of your paragraphs had really short sentences that made it kind of choppy to read...yeah. Love it anyway!

I love it! Now we get to see where he got those magic balls... totally cool :) How much into witness protection is it gonna over lap? Its gonna be really cool to see their first meeting through his eyes... Can't wait to read more :) Oh and I love the title

OMGOMGOMG!!! I haven't actually read this one yet, but I was confused as to why I had a story update for Witness when it wasn't updated... then I seen the link in the corner and I got all uber excited and squealing and my friend looked at me like I was a nutcase, but then again she hasn't read this awesome story so she doesn't understands why I was wicked excited!! Now, I am going to go through and read it now. lol. :D

Already started? Haha I'm so exited for this story! I really want to know what he was thinking ;)

this is cool..if you want i have an idea for a title..".the serch for the lucky one."... its just a though =]

WOW! update soon plz!!!
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