Obscurity - Comments

I have but one word: incredible.

The current layout is awesome, and I love how everything just flowed so well... I love how you introduced a new character slowly. It was phenomenal.

i love everything about it... the confusion in the beginning the characters the layout...
...everything.

YAY! I forgot most of this story but I read the chapter before... and it clicked in my head... I'm a little confused but I think I get the gist of whats going on so I'll be good...

But honestly I don't remember what the old layout was like.... I like this one though! :D All I knew is that it changed.... because I don't remember a bloody handprint story type thingy :D haha

It's a very interesting story though, as much as I read and remember. It would be thrilling to hear the rest of it! :>D

great chapter!

And I like the new layout a lot, it's more sinister so if that's the direction it's heading in it's perfect.
But if you want more innocent or inquistive I'd stick with the old one (though I personally prefer the new one) :) Update soon!

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This is utter, sheer brilliance. Although, it is difficult to understand who is speaking at times..

I whole-heartedly agree.

. . . what happened in this chapter?
I'm happy it's back but I'm kind of confused.

OOOOOOOooooooooo love the new chapter! :D It's freaking awesomesauce! I'm a little confused still but I think it's because I have to think it through.

This is utter, sheer brilliance. Although, it is difficult to understand who is speaking at times..

Maybe it was a month until you updated, but I love the writing style and how you describe such a tragic illness that some people struggle with every day. I think we wish the illnesses were fictional, but the scary part of all is that they're real and you really capture that well in your chapters.

Oh please write more! I can't wait to see all through this! :D interesting statements Jet says too. heehee, some made me laugh, others made me giggle with confusion.

It may have been a month, but I still love this :)

Oh, it's back! :D

Yay! :)

It was good, more soon, si?

That was fabulous and worth the waiting.

Most definitely worth the wait :)

He is so insane.

I agree with Mymockingbird.

More por favor. :D

This is so unique. Its very intriguing. I can't wait for more.

I would very very very very VERY much enjoy another chapter soon!! Reading from Audrey's perspective was great, and it's so interesting to get inside a person with schizophrenia's head. I'm doing something similar in one of my stories, Cracked, so check it out sometime :) Still. I LOVE it. More more more please!!!

I loved reading this from Audrey's perspective, it was really refreshing. I also like how even though this is a dark topic but it's not as heavy as some people write about it.

It's really, really original and... different.

It's so much more... darker, but lighter in a way than all the other mental illness stories here.

More soon, please and thank you. :D