My Boys For Life - Comments

Oh my gosh please update. No really please.

Slowly updating is right!
DANG YOU NEED TO UPDATE <3

I love this

Pleaseee continue! This rocks!:)

I love this! Please update soon!

Please continue. This is the best Outsiders story i have ever read on Mibba

I Love it
Update soon :D

I like it more updates =]

I love it.
Please Continue

I absolutely love this.
Rumble scenes are the best :D

Subscribed and waiting for more!

Hell yes I'll subscribe!! I love it how original!

The Outsiders is my favourite book/movie ever! And im starting to like this story as well.
Keep going, your doing good :)

Whewt. Another Outsiders story. =]
But I'm with ballet shoes. Nia needs to be more Soc-like.

Okay, this has nothing to do with your actual writing, but things would be much easier to read if you spaced out your paragraphs. And you've also got a lot of grammar errors, so you should really fix those.

As to your writing, it's a nice idea. I love The Outsiders, it's one of my favourite books, so I was really excited to see where you took this. However, I think introducing all the boys in the first chapter was rushing it a little. You mentioned that Nia was a Soc, what happened for her to move to the Greaser part of town? Also, since she's a Soc, she would obviously look the part. Regardless of how nice the boys are, I don't think they would welcome a strange Soc with open arms, it just doesn't seem that realistic to me.