I wonder if you are a ballet dancer too? or how do you know so much about it...
when I was a little girl I a loved the way they moved...even I started to try but of course it wasn't good...LOL anyway I can't wait to read what Ville's reaction will be when he sees her in front.
great chapter. i love how you had linde just force the guys to go to the ballet. very sneaky. also really enjoyed the word play between soya and josef. a very fun read :)
I absolutely love this! The anticipation of waiting for Soya to talk to the band and then she doesn't nearly killed me! And also when Ville wouldn't pay attention to who he was watching dance, it took everything in me not to scroll down to the bottom to find out what happened! I really do love it! :D
lovely chapter. you've developed the characters extremely well. i feel like i can picture them perfectly. i like the twist at the end, how she snags ville's shirt and leaves them tickets for her ballet. it was a nice close to the chapter. one thing i noticed in the very start, though, was that you used the word graceful alot. i mean, it makes sense as she's a ballerina and it describes her movements quite well, but it got to be a bit repetitive. just using a different word or slightly different description would work. anyways, well done! :)
touching chapter... it makes me so sick to see parents who wants to get control of their kids future.... thank you for the new story...looking forward to read more
This was really amazing and very long :o A great start for a story. I think this story is going to make it big. I'm going to subscribe to it and see what happens :)
That kiss in the rain was so sweet and romantic, i hope you'll be making more scenes like that.