November 25th, 2013 at 05:32am
*Comment Swap*
I didn't really like this. It's more of personal preferences, I guess. The writing was good. I like your writting style. I wish I could have been more connected with this. Anyway good job! And I'm sorry for my lacking comment.
The story was wonderful and emotional the way a good story should be, and I’m so glad I read it.