Punch Me, I'd Bleed - Comments

Marcus does seem a bit...up-tight?
He should give Jay a chance (you know, despite Jay's craziness) because Jay is wicked cool!
And his sister? She is quite annoying aha.

This story is great, and it is actually very original. A lot of stories say that they are going to be original, but then are not. Marcus and Jay are great too, with what seem to be very well developed personalities. And one of the best parts, was when I looked at the characters page, they weren't stereotipical emo kids. Like Marcus is a popular kid, and he actually looks like a popular kid. Olivia seems nice too, I hope she doesn't get totally trashed.
I can't wait to read more, and can't for the life of me understand why you have so few comments, and stars.

“Teacher, teacher! There’s a hobo on the playground!” That was a hilarious line! I actually quite like this story, Jay is amazing. I love how Marcus is actually putting up with him as well, even though he gets annoyed with him...bless him.

Favorite line? “… Oh. I thought we were friends,”
I feel a bit sorry for Jay actually. He seems to be in some deep shit, with all that alcoholic shit and stuff. But I love him! He's such an awesome character!

Okay, so Jay pretty much invaded Marcus' privacy and stole his number, then rang him up to pick him up from somewhere even though he doesn't know him that well.
I seriously love Jay! even though, you know...he's like an alcoholic or something aha.

I seriously love where this is going!
And Jay is still awesome!

“Marcus! I got a library card!”
Yes, that is my favourite line. Just because he sounds so happy to actually have one...sorta like an excited little kid. Seriously, I'm telling you..that Jay dude is freakin' awesome.

I love this!
Jay is awesome! He cracks me up!
I'm looking forward to more!

i freakin' love this! definatly one of my favourites =D
can't wait for more ^^

Well, Jay cracks me up.
“That’s rather unfortunate for you, I must say,” He said, putting on a fantastic, upper-crust British accent." That was freakin' funny....and I loved all the nick names he was coming out with for Marcus.
He's a brilliant character aha.