You know, I get nostalgic quite frequently and when I do, I like to leave a comment here aha. I was re-reading some of my old stories (oh god, I'm cringing so hard. Your comments were so nice, my writing was so awful) and then I always come back to this. So basically, what I'm saying is, if ever you published any of your stuff, I'd buy it for sure. Like, Jay and Marcus and Robin and Cora are still relevant to me at the age of 22 as they were when I was 17.
I don't know what suddenly made me think about this story, but a few days ago it crossed my mind and I haven't been able to get it out of my head. So here I am, just about to reread it, and to let you know that I really love this story. I don't know if this is discontinued or not, but I remember loving this story so much that I have to reread it no matter what. I hope you update it at some point! :)
Just leaving my annual comment! I always check back here and there. Two years, I can't even believe it aha. I showed this story to my friend and she loves it, you're still one of my favourite authors on here! Hope you're well :)
I don't know if I've commented on this story before but I have to now. This is my absolute favorite story on here and has been for about two years. If this were a book I would definitely buy it (and maybe try to get the author to sign my copy). This is the most eloquently written story I've read on here and all I can say is kudos. Keep up the good work; this is the one story I always look foreword to :). So until the next update I'll be re-reading it, thank you!
I think I've left like seventeen-hundred comments on this story (and I feel absolutely no shame in that at all), and here is another one for me to seem like a loser over, yet not give two shits about. But I just have to say that this story is the one that keeps me going, ok. And I don't mean that I want to kill myself frequently and this is the only thing that makes me happy, or anything. I mean this story makes me crawl back to mibba every few months just to make sure the update email didn't accidentally get lost in the webosphere. So far, it hasn't. :/ But I think about this a lot, because Jay is one of my favourite characters and I refuse to forget about his awesomeness and let him die and be buried by other awesome characters. :) I hope you decide to update soon, or get inspiration (if that's the problem), basically I hope you get rid of whatever it is that has so much time going by!
I feel like this is the least eloquent comment I've ever left... Oh well, I guess haha. <33
I gotta say, I really like this story.. It takes an especially good kind of writer to get me to read 20 chapters before anything remotely homosexual occurs. And that is what you've done. And I enjoyed and was drawn in by those first 20 chapters. I just read chapter 30, and i'm contemplating on stopping only because from here I only have six more chapters until I have to wait for an update. I hope I'm getting my point across, I'm glad I found your story it is written very well and quite original
I REFUSE TO GIVE UP ON THIS STORY Because you will update again, I know you will. And it will be the best thing and I will flail everywhere when I see it. All I have to do is wait.
This is my attempt at one of those comments that give the author motivation to come back and write more. This story is great. Simple as that, you have created one of the most realistic yet entertaining stories I have ever found on here and I would love to see it continue. Your pace is fantastic, your characters, everything. Hopefully you have some time to update in the future. :)
Okay, so it's like half one in the morning as I type this because I was bored, came onto Mibba and started re-reading this story. I literally couldn't stop reading till I finished.
So much love for this story. Jay and Marcus are like the ultimate couple.
I MISS A UPDATE OF YOU. DID MIBBA DELETE IT? With this I mean chapter 37 obviously. I am addicted to this story. Read it twice now. Please, please, please update soon. And I am sorry for your heart D: