I'm a Stripper At An All Boys Boarding School? How Do I Keep This A Secret? - Comments

This is a terrific story. There was a good flow to it and kept me entertained an wanting to read more constantly. Throughout the course of the story there were minor grammatical errors and there was no consistency in the time line. Overall it was a good read, just remember to proofread or have someone else proofread before you post.
~Mari

I read this title and honestly though, '...Wtf.' But then I was like, 'Alright comment swap. If this is what you gave me...' and proceeded to read. And I found that this has astonishing potential! Especially in the beginning, I liked the back-and-forth explanation of Darcy's situation. It really worked, and with a few touch-ups, it could really be sparkling.

The rest happens rather quickly. Getting more of what's happening inside Darcy's head, like a bit more personal background and her opinions on things--how she made her decision to go to the school, ect, might help. Also, you continuously use the form 'too' where it should be 'to'.

Overall, interesting job! xx

This story was sooo good and emotional, I cried and laughed a lot in this story. Now I'm going to read the sequel. I will read your other stories, but not now

It was an amazing story, I gotta give you that. I like the ending, even though it was a bit choppy. It was still put ttogether enough. Totally pumped to read the sequel! Happy last chapter, love!

The story is officially finished. Thank you everyone who supported my story and helped me through the way-too-long timeframe it took my to write this whole thing :) I hope you guys are happy with the way things ended and I'm really looking forward to hearing your thought, what you wanted to happen, and what you think will happen in the sequel (for those of you that haven't clicked to the sequel page, I pretty much crushed your dreams in the info lol . . .but I promise its actually good and I'm starting it once I finish this comment! So subscribe!). I lost A LOT of subscribers from taking too long to upgrade, so thankyou so much to the people that stayed! As for my last comments above, I decided not to publicly give out my tumblr because I don't really want everyone to know who I am, but if you really want it you can message me. And I would still love for anyone to send me some stories.

Thank you all again for your support

<3

Me want updates >:(

So i'm totally at work, and have been reading your story for the past like 3 or 4 hours and i'm i love with it!!! it's soooo unique and amazing!! i can't WAIT for the next chapter!!!

-Rachel

Wop. Don't look now. I'm back.

I wish Mibba had a way to make public announcements to my readers without having to comment on my own stories. Oh well.

Well after a little bit of tumbling, I've decided what I must do.

So I had a realization a little while ago that I don't spent hardly enough time on this website. And then I had the realization that it's most likely because all of the stories I'm subscribed to on this website have cobwebs on them. I'm serious, all of these people make my updates look amazing. Its been at least a year since I received an email telling me one of these stories was updated.

Basically, I want to read some stories. And I want to talk to some people. So send me some storied: send your stories, send your friend's stories, send your favorite story on this website. I'm hoping that I'll get a new reason to check up on here often, plus I could use some inspiration. So send them in messages, post them in comments, tell me to go check em out. Maybe I'll even share the best ones with my readers ;) (not that I have too many to suggest to you anymore)

Also message me: ask my questions, start up a conversation, tell me to follow you on tumblr or polyvore (sadly I will not follow you on twitter or facebook because of my anonymous-ness) Really I'm just looking for some reasons to check up on mibba some more :)

Lots of love for the holidays ;)

<3

Aww I love you guys so much <3 a few more chapters and were over :( I'm so happy this story could become successful so fast, and I hope you guys will subscribe to my other stories so we don't have to say goodbye! I'm working on the next chapter so it should be out soon. Also, I made a tumblr, after much much procrastinating, so I'm gonna post that once I get it together so that you guys can ask my questons or whatever :) You should know I'm not very tech savy so it probably wont be very pretty lol

Can you do the guys POV ?? of when her secret is revealed??

well i love ur story and i love the characters please keep writting

Awwwww. Amazing chapter. :))))) I feel loved. I'm almost positive that you just thanked me in your last chapter. I stick to what I said when I said that your characters are amazingly original. I think that she is still sticking to her personality, but just growing up a little. I'm so happy that your making a squeal!!! And don't worry about updating. I think it's good that you are trying to find your inspiration. It's better to have slow updates and well written chapters than to have quick ones with poorly thought out ones. I can't wait to read another chapter! And just to let you know, every time I read one of your stories it makes me want to write some of my own. Keep writing! :D <3

I still love you & will continue to read your stories & encourage you to finish them as long as you decide to write them <3(:

love the update :D

I hope that she says yes to Rayden and come backs to school with him. They're meant to be together. :) Great update

OMFG! I thiught you died or something, when a month came and no updates....then after two or three more...I was positive

can't wait for the next update :D

I really think you should update this story(:

I LOVED the story. I really hope you do the sequel! Everything is so original, and I LOVE the characters! The plotline is deep, your characters actually stick to one personallity, and you built the relationships beautifully. Congratulations on having one of the best stories out there. I can't wait to read your others and hope with all of my heart that you write a sequel!

I just read all 46 Chapters in one sitting XD love the story tho! ^_^ keep it up! and i will decide 'sequel or no sequel' once you finish it, cuz then, and only then, will i know if im satisfied with the end