I'm a Stripper At An All Boys Boarding School? How Do I Keep This A Secret? - Comments

  • alicesmommy

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    love the story ... when are you gonna update again?
    April 20th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • InspirasiGirl

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    My thoughts on the fight isn't all that bad. I expected harsher insults, colder expressions and less screaming. I also think this should be the last final chapter and you should get the back together in the sequal. Well anyway, it's greatly written and I loved it since I read the first chapter(:
    April 14th, 2011 at 08:31pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Poor darcy :(
    Great update
    April 6th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • CaitieCullen

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    I think, if a sequel were to ensue, Darcy should get back into the swing of her old life and old friends and habits, etc. Then, after a few months or so, you-know-who tracks her down, yada yada... But that's just my imput:) I love this story, but I feel like it needs to end in tragedy...(: The kind that'll make me cry and brood for days.
    April 6th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • ALLSTARLOVE333

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    ok DANG they need to be together in the end though they both said some harsh stuff but when push comes to shove they still love each other and always will :/ oo btw I love your other story where the girl loses her memory as well :)
    April 6th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • jaylon1134

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    You should do a sequel on like they meet again and there both really successful or something JUST DO A SEQUEL!!!! LOL =P
    April 6th, 2011 at 01:55am
  • who.could.guess

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    omg omg omg omg
    DRAMA!!! AMAZING chapter!(:
    gah, i still cannot believe how it all went down...so sad):

    UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!
    April 6th, 2011 at 01:36am
  • Rainisfalling

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    Teehee I love when people start new pages.
    My idea for the sequel might be different then your idea guys -.-
    Very different
    If anyone wants to help, message me =]
    April 5th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • mama-val

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    Cool I started a new page!!!!! Woo HOO
    April 5th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • mama-val

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    I know you said this wasn't the end, but personaly I think you should end it here and do a sequel. That would be great. I think this is the climax, and a perfect place to add suspence by starting and new story.
    You don't have to listen to me I just think that would be great.

    UPDATE SOON!
    April 5th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • Nessynugget

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    I love this story:3
    April 5th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    April 5th, 2011 at 10:59pm
  • purple_luver1o1

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    Love the story! Upload though I wanna know wat happens next. I just want someone to punch Jesse, I actually want Darcy to punch him tht would be epic :) I can really picture tht lol.
    April 4th, 2011 at 09:42am
  • rosaleen4ever

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    I LOOOVEEEE your new chapterXD It was really well written. UPDATE FASTER!!!!!!!!^_^
    March 27th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Rainisfalling

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    For people who have figured it out that I post here when I have something to say:

    I wrote the next chapter. The whole thing. But I'm doing extreme editing because I want it to have the right amount of panic from Darcy, anger from Rayden, and the chaos that her life is falling apart.

    Granted it could have none of that at all, but at least I'm trying, right?

    Anyway, just thought I'd let you all know that im not procrastinating. I'm also trying to get out the first chapter to a brand new story, which should be equally as good as Stripper, maybe even better? I Hope you'll all read it. Until then, please know I'm thrilled with my comments! We have exactly ten more comments then subscribers (Well eleven once I post this). But we can do better! Keep commenting =] next chapter up soon!

    <3
    March 24th, 2011 at 07:33pm
  • InspirasiGirl

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    OMFG!!! I've been waiting for this moment for a while now(: Update soon.
    March 24th, 2011 at 09:51am
  • pyromaniac123

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    KEEP UP THE.... well not fast.... but QUALITY work =)
    lol all good things take time- but after how you left that last chapter please hurry a bit!

    love the update but dont leave us hanging too long!

    p.s. as a reader who loves to get into the characters that she reads about some good language when describing his and her reactions are very nice.
    March 22nd, 2011 at 01:13am
  • AngelFake

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    I want Rayden to punch Jesse :P
    March 21st, 2011 at 06:32pm
  • BeautifulAbomination

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    Teeheehee. I love this.
    March 21st, 2011 at 07:06am
  • CaitieCullen

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    I'm addicted to your stories<3 I think that it's best to keep it in Darcy's or Rayden's POVs because they're, of course, the most interesting characters. I'm really looking forward to your next update, so take your time and make it awesome !:)
    March 20th, 2011 at 11:15pm