Have We Gone Too Far? - Comments

i am LOOOOOVING this!! its GREAT! i love everything about this!!!!

I finished reading this yesturday, but didn't get the chance to comment on it due to finishing a chapter for my book so I'm doing it now at almost four in the morning. I've been reading this for the past month, I really enjoyed reading it and I'm glad Mr. Baker is dead. I've wanted something to happen to him for a while. I really loathe that guy. You did a superb job on this, pity there wasn't more to it. I would have liked to know what became of Zack and Cole next.

great :P
but i just have to point out, chapter 47, it says 'Will the baby be airtight' and i think its meant to be 'alright' and it did make me chuckle :')

The tension in those last few chapters was amazing. Brilliant writing.
It felt like I was riding a psychotic hoarse into a burning stable.
Gonna go read the sequal right now.

this might take a while to read... but it looks good!

he's dead! tht guy freaked the hell outta me >.<

I have a question
...
What happened to Beth :P
Hehe, and well done on finishing this Rach, you really should be proud!
And of course this was going to get comments you silly billy, how could it not? XP
Awwww, I was gonna write moar soon plz :3 but then I remembered there are no chapters to come *saaaaaad faaaaaace*
I think for the sequel you should explain what happened to Beth, and set it, like, 5-10 or so years in the future, and I can't wait to read more of your awesomness :3

Oooh... The awesome image of Zander standing there with a gun, all badass (let's pretend that he's not half-dead from shock...) will be burned into the back of my eyes forever. Huzzah :D. Though that strike-through bit unsettled me a bit - not wanting to let the gun go?.. Please don't turn him into some psychotic killer. On the other hand... I can already imagine the title - "It's always the quiet kid", a story of a cute, silent sheepish boy, who turns into cold-blooded killer every night, taking out every person who gets too close to his secret crush... Whoa O.O Imma shut up now.
Anyways! Loved this thing, yo. I usually don't read stories that are incomplete (too many heartbreaks due to infinite hiatus(es?)), but yours was completely worth it :). I totally fell in love with the sheep-boy ( I admit that I was a bit sceptical about him at first - a bullied emo kid with dark past? really?...), but you managed to pull it off. Or maybe I'm just a sucker for cuties. And slash featuring them. Hehe. I dare you to tell me you weren't secretly hoping for another Zanacky moment xD.
Oh well, enough Zander talk. Enough any talk, actually. Just thanks for an awesome story (possibly an awesome sequel, too) *gets teary eyes*.
Bye-byes! (for now?) ^.^

OMG!!!!
That was A-MAZING!!
Mr baker is dead!!!!
Zander shot him!!
You have to do a sequel I love this and I'm so sad that it's finished :(
I really hope you put the sequel up soon :)

I can't believe it's over. And you are doing a sequel? That'd be so awesome! Thank you so much for writing this and sticking with it-- I loved every chapter that I read. And yes! The demon is gone! This is one awesome kick-aft wonderful unbelievablely great story. A-mazing.

Can I just say, this story is damn insanely amazing.
I saw it on the updated stories thing on mibba,
And I read every single chapter,
It took me four hours or so,
But I did (':
I actually got so attached to Zan, no kidding :'D
This is one of the best things I've read, you have awesome talent (:

WOMAN.
MAKE ME A SEQUEL.

I vote yes for the Sequel :)

Lol!!! The drugged up Unicorn! hahaha! Love it! I was laughing so hard! Love it! :)

O M G
Yay for Zander!!
Cole should like so die or something like that or Mr. Baker cos then all taht will be for nothing and
Sequel!!!!!!!
Update!! ;)

ZAN! :D
Thank fuck.
I really,
would just drop dead if he shot Cole instead.
-.-
HE'D BETTER NOT HAVE. D<

Erm.
Right.
SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL.

*does a victorious fist pump* Oh yeah. Me likes 8-D Go go Zan ^.^
Now... More please! I wanna know how everything turns out.

...Oh. Haha. Wouldn't it be fun if Zanny accidentally (really now?) shot poor Cole dead?... Now that would be a twist xD.

:O i cant belive tht just happened!
:O i cant believe i forgot 2 comment last time!
:O i cant beleive it's not butter!
O.o wait. what?

ZOMG!
I actually kind of forgot he was up there XD
Awwww, poor Zan *saaaaaaaaaaaad faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaace*
And definately a sequel, well that's if you want to ;)
Oh, oh, oh! I noticed that in the authors notes u sed would that be too far? And I was like ahhhhhhhhhhhh it sounds like the title (B
Moar soon plz :3

Ooooh. OOOOOOOOOoooh. my. O_O
Now, on to my usual self. Meaning... prediction time! Hate to be the buzzkill (no I don't...), but *drumroll, please*... Cole is not dead! Yaaay. You know you all love my 'prophecies'... I'm guessing that the "Bang" came either from John (you know, all the crawling on the floor, then wrestling with Daren... Derek... Well, you know, the bastard guy. I'm not sure if he had gun at that moment (I remember it flying away at some point? I don't know...), or Mr. Baker, but someone got Cole out of the way or.... Oh wait O.O Just thought of an amazing plot twist! That would be so cool... *drifts off into the droolingland*. One word: Zan! "He's standing in the staircase in all his sheepish glory, with a gun he just found, looking all badass..." *^*...
If I'm wrong, I shall become an official laughingstock of HWGTF. If I'm right... Teehee ^.^
So that little boy (Geoff) did come into play after all! I remember guessing something about him earlier... Brownie points for me! But sigh... You're tying everything up into a nice neat bow. Meaning the end is really here TT.TT Now excuse me, I gotta go bawl my eyes out D;

By the way... If you really did kill Cole... Well, I have new-found respect for you. Hats off :D
Thanks for the update, by the way! I can has more? ^.^