Stain - Comments

I love this story(: but can you make the text a different color ? It's really hard to read.

Hey! Loved the update!
But... I thought that the purple eyed vampires couldn't remember their past?? Or isn't Klara a purple eyed vampire? o.O??????
I'm confused....
Update soon!!!

Yaaay, updates!!!
I ist so excitedddd. :}
This was realllly good.
You did a great job writing the flashbacks.
Yay for prostitution!! XD
Moreeee soon, yo.
Dis storeh, I's be lovin' it yo. :D
Kiloveyouuubai<3.

I just finished reading this and I absolutely LOVE it! It's really good so PLEASE don't take it down. I can't wait for the next update :)

This is a really good story! I cannot wait until you update!
I hope it's soon! :'D

Ohhh mah gahh!!
This shit is sooo intense.
Like, seriously.
This shit is amazing.
It's actually inspiring me quite a bit, which I've forgotten to tell you about.
You can ask me about it when you read this comment and then IM me back. XD
But yea, this is sooo good.
I can't wait for more.
Especially with the idea you told me about earlier.
Anyone who reads this comment,
comment!
Because this girl has uber sweet ideas.
Which is why I'm writing this longggg ass comment.
You gotzta update this veryyyy soon!!
Very, very soon.[:
iLoveYouuu.
<3

Poor Klara. So is the creature Alena or some weird freaky thing?

KEEP WRITING!!! ^ agreed.

'Alena stared back at the monster, terrified of what she had become.' This bit, right at the very end, sent my head spinning. I'm confused! What the hell?! This better be explained in the next chapter!!!! xD

THIS ISN'T TRUEEEE. Four different people commented before my last comment. :] YOU MUSN'T TAKE THIS DOWN! I'LL SUE!
Especially because this is epic and it's getting even epic-er as the chapters pass and now I can't wait to see what happens!!
I was waiting for one of those random parts to be in there too. LMAO. XD
Anywayz, definitelyyyy update this again soon because I FUCKING LOVE IT.
End of story.
iLoveYouuu.
<3

Okay so, this story, gives me orgasms. Just sayin'. XD
No but seriously, I really like this story.
And it does deserve more feedback.
Because it's awesome.
And I loveeee it.
More soon?
Yessss.
Comment4Comment?
If I have any updates for you to comment.
Idk if I do.
But yea,
MORE SOON!!!!
Loveeee this.
ILoveYouuu.
<3

I'm in love with this story pretty much, haha. Cant wait for another update :D

;) I'd bump up the rating soon, so you don't get reported. This is awesome!

good story can't wait for more

Lol the sex scene made me laugh it a good way nice for you first time( er writing a sex scene I mean).

Oh lawdy. Haha. This was sooo amazing. I already told you this, but I'm telling you again.

For a first time writing a sex scene like this, it was so good. The detail was perfect and to the point. I just loveddd it.(:

Definitelyyyy more soon!! This story is one of my favorites by your. :}

Iloveyouuu<3.

Thanks guys.
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Seven more comments for an update, please!(:

Dude, nice stuff about the Tate murders. That shit is gruesome as hell, seriously.
&& I loveee the ending though. With like you got into the sex scene, but you didn't want to like ruin anything. It was perfect. :}
Write moreee soon!!! :DDDD
I<3Youuu!!!

<333 i just am in LOVE with this story!! ok, here is another comment to get to 10 (if not already there).
the detail about the story was very good.(:

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH my gosh! Love love love love it! I love how much detail you put into it and I swear I'm starting to crush on Aleksander! Eeep, PLEASE Update soon :D I subscribed \^O^/