Stain - Comments

great update!
I agree, i like his outfit better

AWESOME AS EVER!!!! SORRY I HAVEN'T COMMENTED BEFORE! BUT YEA! AWESOMES!!!!!!!
I'M WAITING FOR HER TO GET SOME MEMORIES! AND WHEN I READ 'BLUE RARE' I THOUGHT HER HER COLOR WAS A CHANGIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AWESOMES!
LOVE IT!
NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I remember you showing me half of this. Hehe. It's still omnomnom amazing.
I lovelovelove thisssss. You should update this lots and lots moreee.[:

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I loved it.
'Nuff said.
<3

Haha cockney, I learn that from Nancy Drew.

I'm waiting for the action to begin.

OMNOMNOMNOMNOMS.
Kellyy likes this a lotttttt. The descriptiveness is very...nummyful. I can't wait for more of this. Vampires && Werewolves=Boners for Kellyy. FUCK YES. :]]]]]]]
I<3YouLyndseyyy.

great story you got here. I defintally see a future in store for it. :)
*subscribes*

Update soon!!

Lyndseyyyyyy I LOVED this. I really hope you turn it into a full length.
&& thanks for entering it in my competition. :]]]]]]]]]]
I<3Youuuu.

Wow... This is very good! The description; the thoughts running through her head; the intense action - it all made my adrenaline go! My heart was actually beating fast by the end of this story, too.

I think you could of elaborated on this a bit though, and made it more horrific and detailed. This was a nice little teaser but it didn't feel like a full story, like even a one-shot should feel.