I Kept Pulling My Heart Back Together for You, but Now You're Finally Picking Up the Pieces - Comments

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I really liked this.
It was sad, then happy, then sad and frustrating, then hopeful.
I love stories that have those kinds of emotional rollar coasters, I honestly almost cried when Danny first kissed Annie.
Well done <3

haha the last to lines made me laugh so much :D

I liked it... up until the ending :(
Not very happy ending.

Firstly, I want to thank you for entering the contest! :)

Alright, about the word count thing, it's mainly for one-shots because you never know the limit with those. It's obvious this is over 800 words. The first chapter has a lot of grammatical errors, the other two have very few, but they're still present. There are parts you may like to go back and read over. The plot line was good, original. I was expecting them to get together at the end, so you surprised me when they didn't. That's good, though. I hate it when the ending is obvious. Also, your background picture is cut off by hte words, so you may want to move it over if you want it to actually be visible.

We'd appreciate it if you can put a link to the contest in the summary page. You do that by going [url=Then you put the link here and follow it with a closed bracket.]Then you would put what you want to call it here, so for you it would be Slash Quote Contest. Then you end it with what I'm about to do.[/url]

All in all, this was a good entry. :) Keep up the good work!