Inside of You - Comments

He's gunna tell it to her like it is... he's in love with her sister and it's never gunna happen between them! He better at least!
Update soon :)

Ah now its Garrett's time of the month!

Poor Garrett ): I feel genuinly bad for him D;
even though she's cute with John, I honestly think she'd be cuter with Garrett ):
she's breaking his heart right now D: that's not fair D:
update soon

Awe. I love that John is so caring towards her.
I find it funny that he thought Andy admitting her feelings to him,
Made him feel creeped out. Lol.
I want her to talk to Andy, because even though she's angry,
They're still blood and they need to talk.
I love the new layout, too! (:

I love the maine and I'm soooo into this story now like you don't even know...
I'm only on chapter 3 though so I'll write my thoughts when I'm done :)

I seem to hate her sister right now,
lmfao, she needs to get her act together.
and forgive her already! (:
hopefully that happens when you update.
SUBSCRIBED ! :D

ooo i wonder what Andy has gots to say!!

Love it : )

MELIKEY!! :))

NOOOOOOOOOO! NO TALKING! STUPID BITCH --'
she's just gonna steal John anyway, psht, whore --'
sorry xd anyway, good update xd update again soon xd

i liked this chaper :3
i still hate andy though.

I KMEW IT! I KNEW SHE LIKED JOHN! Lol. It was always in the back of my mind that she wasn't completely angry with Olivia, based on her leavine, alone. But dammit ... What did she expect? She even TOLD Olivia to go after him! I mean, really ... That girl is just all messed up! Lol. I just wonder what Olivia will do now, and how it's going to effect her and John's relationships.

I KMEW IT! I KNEW SHE LIKED JOHN! Lol. It was always in the back of my mind that she wasn't completely angry with Olivia, based on her leavine, alone. But dammit ... What did she expect? She even TOLD Olivia to go after him! I mean, really ... That girl is just all messed up! Lol. I just wonder what Olivia will do now, and how it's going to effect her and John's relationships.

Well that was a twist!
Love thiss :)

OOO John i'm pretty sure John is not telling Liv something
Total drama story hehe! and Andy is a bitch period

Beautiful chapter!! gosh andy and JOHN!?!?!
no way!! who does your head work cause i totally didnt see this coming :))

Oh my God?!

Sorry I haven't commented for the last few chapters! I love them all! I love this story! It's so great.
I really can't wait for more!

I'm glad that their aunt came and is hopefully going to take care of things. Hopefully she slaps Andy's bitch ass. Lmao. And oh! John is being a horndog. Hahaa. He better keep it in his pants! And I can't believe Andy would make up some bullshit like that to John. And I still feel bad for Garrett, but I love John more, soooooo. Hahaa. I can't waitfor more! (:

jebakwvekebdn i loved this chapter!
you actually have character development in your story unlike a lot of the other stories here.