Inside of You - Comments

SICK!! man! hahah

Really like this story : )

I hope it doesn't get worse, 'cause right now I wanna smack Andy --' maybe she'll find her brain back and stop being a bitch D;

haha John is adorable!!
and like I said before her
sister is psycho to the O

I feel bad for not commenting, my internet hasn't been working!
I caught up on the story and man I love it, it just keeps getting better and better :)

a bunch of cuties!! who knew ?!?

She's so cute with both John and Garrett, awh ;3 update soon ;D

even though it's kinda a filler, it was still really good!
I'm starting to hate Andy a lot though. she just bothers me.

Yay Aunt!! maybe her sister
wont be as bitchy hahah!

I love this story. (:

Your writing is awesome. Seriously, it is.

Awe. The whole wishing on a star thing made me smile.
And then John saying he didn't need to be in an oven, genuinely made me laugh.
And then Andy had to come in and shit the whole thing away.
I have a feeling that their mom's death isn't the only reason she's so upset,
But I have no clue. Lol.
I love Garrett and the boys for being so supportive and loving towards
Olivia, because she needs it.
I can't wait for more!
OH, and if you killed Andy, I would be mad at ya! Lmao. (:

Update!! yes that was great obviously!! :)

This chapter made me feel so bad for Olivia!
it's getting really good though!

dude her sister is so messed up!!

I hate Andy (; she deserves to be death ;x you don't say that shit about your own sister, psht.
Fuck andy ;3 I love you story =D

Awe. This chapter was incredibly sweet. I loved getting the information of their past and whatnot. It helps to see how they've gotten so close. If I were Olivia, I'd be thanking John myself. He's helped her with so much, and now the death of her mother. I loved it and can't wait for more! (:

cute story
subin!!

I liked this. I like knowing about their past because I feel clueless about it. But Her and John are so cute! I do understand where her sister is coming from though. Alot of people blame other people for their loved one's death. It's just a way to deal with it.

But for real dude keep this up! I can't wait for more.

( smiley face for the garrett comment above! :) !!!! )

I'm currently at chapter two =D and Garrett is so cute there =D just wanted to say that and I thought I might forget it if I didn't say it now so yeah =D
I LOVE THIS ;d

I smile whenever I read this story :)
That was a really sweet chapter!
Update soon :)