i don't know if you aare still doing this story or not but I really like it and i followed you froom quizilla like most and was wondering if you were going to update this?
The first chapter got me hooked. Shaylee seems like a girl who's got lots to tell, who has a history clouded in mystery. And though that sounded really cheesy, I think it fits. And that's a good thing. Whenever there's even a hint of mystery, I wanna reveal it. And I can't wait to do so. You're a great writer! I bet I'm gonna tell you that more often than you prefer.
you know i have you in quizilla and when i saw the title of the story i got piss thinking someone had plagiarized you XD i was about to report you until, I notice it was you XD
hey i can't figure out why i can't get on Quizilla so yeah i looked up your story and here you are :) so i was wondering if you were going to update on here still????
cant wait for the next chapter to come out i love this story lol i wonder what Colten will think of her when he sees her n the dress lol well update soon
hahaha i love your sense of humor when i read the comment about flat stanley i burst out laughing! lol i like both of them but blake has an evil side O0O nnoooooo lol anyways great story cant wait for the next update! im jealous i also want a big fluffy wolf!
hahaha i love your sense of humor when i read the comment about flat stanley i burst out laughing! lol i like both of them but blake has an evil side O0O nnoooooo lol anyways great story cant wait for the next update! im jealous i also want a big fluffy wolf!
yeah. until like chapter 16 i didn't proof read them.
& i'm only human. I don't have time to analyze every word, or i'd never be able to post. But i'm trying to keep people happy. (mainly on quizilla a bunch of people read it there) So sorry if there are a few errors.
i think you should update both ways. you may be surpirsed, i think a lot of people like this story a lot. I think that theres just so many stories it takes awhile for them to circulate! Dont give up! :D
man i wish this is finished i really want to know what happens a lot! youre doing a great job my only suggestion would be fix a little grammical errors. Like pore is supposed to be poor i think( i dont know it you eant it on purpose cuase it was there often). You also need to seperate some comments cause is made it confusing who was talking to who. But, you have a wrting style that has some awsome voice in it and i like how you had refernces for the clothes! Youre doing a great job and cant wait for more! :D :D :D (im not gonna lie i wish she had a clone cause i like blake and colton 0o0) lol :D