OH MY GOD I REMEMBER THIS STORY I was thinking to myself, 'hmm, this is really familar, perhaps I should see if I've commented.' AND I HAVE I REMEMBER THIS OH MY GOD This is so exciting you have no idea.
Okay, as far as the layout goes, I think it's quite cute and I love the graphic, but I feel like Bella Thorne (pretty sure that's her name?) looks a bit young compared to Jacob Black? I'm going to try really hard to not see them as a couple and imagine my own girl, because it's kind of creeping me out just a tad.
As far as the content goes, I love it so far. I didn't remember that this was the first chapter but anyhoo it doesn't matter because I think the first chapter did an excellent of job of intriguing me and consequently making me re-subscribe to this. I like the connection that Heather sees the killer having red eyes which is what vamps in the Twilight world does as well, and I'm also intrigued to see how Jacob enters! Can't wait for more!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON AND I WILL MAKE TWO UPDATES FOR SUNSHINE JUST FOR YOU BECAUSE I AM DYING TO SEE HEATHER AND JAKE MACK AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I JUST RE-READ THE ENTIRE THING I AM DYING AHHHHHHH
Yay!! :D I am sooo terribly happy that you are back :D I couldn't wait for you to write this chapter!! Now my question is; will there be any real danger ;) Please Update Soon! :D <3