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  • Engrave My Heart

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    I'm so proud to be Australian.
    What a wonderful piece of work you have created...
    April 20th, 2011 at 03:52pm
  • colour me perfect.

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    You're amazing for writing this. Honestly... I almost cried. ANZAC day is really important to me and it always has been, and I think that even Australians don't give enough thought to it. This was beautifully written and it's really struck me hard.

    I'll be wearing a poppy for my minute's silence on Monday and praying for the people like the ones in your story.
    April 20th, 2011 at 02:20pm
  • florence

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    This story really hit me hard... I'm practically sobbing, aha. It really is true. And it's amazing that you have written this. I'm proud of the ANZACS, and all other military forces, but at the same time it makes me very sad. Well... war makes me sad.
    April 20th, 2011 at 02:02pm
  • i asked alice.

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    This nearly made me cry.
    Beautiful job.
    July 11th, 2010 at 10:16pm
  • roux.

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    We observe ANZAC day too. Well, at least the politicians do.

    I almost cried reading this. Really. And the sad part about it is that... all of this is true.

    I'm glad you told me about this. It... it was beautiful.
    June 10th, 2010 at 02:42pm
  • volta.

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    So. I'm wondering why none of the other readers commented on this. :/
    I mean...even commenting on the actual idea behind the story.

    There were only two spelling errors, I think, so there goes the critical comment. :]

    I don't know...I want to ramble on about it and all, but I don't think it's going to benefit anyone.

    I'll just say that this is going on my subscription list, even though there's no more chapters going on it, and I'm going to whore it.

    Because...I think people should read it. :]

    Simple as that.

    And I like how in the first chapter I could share the ANZAC pride and sympathy with you. :]
    June 10th, 2010 at 10:13am