Midnight Horrors - Comments

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG he's andy c: XD lol mini spazz attack but but but but but yah dats andy biersack incase you didnt know c:singer of black veil brides c:

awe luke i bet hes cute.... aiden omg half demon hummmm that could be interresting.... update sooooooon ok....

great story please hurry on the chapters i can't wait to continue reading them : )

ok ok ok ..... i love it .... update asap .... thanks for twisting my arm .... lol

Cool chapter. I actually thought she was going to die. :D

chapter nine-very interesting. I can't wait to read more. :)

chapter eight-no mistakes at all. :) great chapter.

chapter seven- I just got to say that you repeated like three words in the first paragraph. I really like the story.

chapter six- at the end I spotted mistakes. Words didn't make sense. I like I said before I think there should be more spacing between paragaphs.

Chapter five-I spotted a period missing. That's all I spotted. :)

For the fourth chapter, there was a word missing and comas, and they=thier. I could quite see what was happeening when Maud was attacking her. It was vague.

She's not our responsibility-great chapter. In some places, I think you should have separated sentences and the whole chapter. There was some grammar mistakes but like I said, great chapter. :)

chapter two-had some spelling mistakes like asprin=asprins; died= to dead. When she was listening to the conversation outside I think it could have been separated like a normal conversation goes. Other than that it was good. :)

Broken House-I really love how you describe everything and the house with the blood. I could just picture it. There was times where your forgot to capatilize when you started a sentence and you put a 'y' when it was suppose to be 'the' and you also missed a word. Other than that it was great.

and also i'd love to help write it :D

This is an awesome story! :P

wow! lyk it so far...post another soon please. i sort of read fast. :D