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post soon please i love the story and i want to know what happens!

well that sucks. its a pretty good story, do you plan to finish it?

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i hope you post soon I loove Molly she's hilarious!

I like your picture - for some reason, I love gory or blood things, it fascinates me.
It took me a while to read this, because I'm a slow reader xD.
So sorry for the late comment, but anyways!
This story is really good, I like it very much.
I have to agree with jacklyn, I think this story has a lot of potential.
So please continue writing, I really enjoy this.
and this is my first time ever reading a Avenged Sevenfold fan-fiction haha, and I actually liked it.

:)

The layout = Amazing. Ace is such an ash-hole. :D Haha. Morgan White.

The prologue wasn't too bad and the plot seems interesting.
I only read the first chapter, but it was pretty good.
There were a few grammer mistakes, like things that shouldn't be capitalized and words in the wrong places.
Good job though, this has lots of potential. (:

The prologue wasn't bad.
I couldn't find any grammar mistakes, but it wasn't exciting or anything.
It didn't sound like you wanted to write it, exactly. Not saying that you didn't, though.
By the time I was done, I didn't want to keep reading.

I really like it :]

found some grammar/spelling errors.
The red against the black kind if made it hard to read.

Other then that this was good. Defently an intresting plot.

Great
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YOUR STORY IS THE 1st AX7 (? is that abbrev. correct? lol) I EVER READ XD
and ohmy, ohmy, Your layout terrifies me c:
I only got to read the first four chapters but I'm going to finish them all.
Just wanted to comment saying so far, really good(;

Okay, this is really good. The plot and everything is great! I think this has so much potential! (:

One thing though: You might want to get a Beta, to help you clean up some grammatical errors.

Other than that, great job! (:

Oh my lord! this is great! ^_^ I love adoption stories like this.
Great job so far yo! >}:D

Wow! She escaped them. Wonder what miss White is going to do now ;)

You just posted the same chapter three times

Poor Maria and Taking that bullet out and stitching it up would hurt like hell!! And nice stealing $200 from them she's smart :D Update soon I really like this story ;)

LOL she robbed them!! aweeeesooome

aww maybe ace isnt such an a-hole after all.
yale on the other hand.. tsk tsk chloroform.. really?
well, at least he apologize so.. its okay hehe
and ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww he took the bullet out..! XD

oh and just a reminder, you posted the same chapter twice. just letting you know so your other readers dont freak out on ya =)

just finished reading the prequel and this one
holy crap its really good, kinda makes you wanna think like molly does
well *subscribes* cant wait for more
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