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  • cobra9874

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    Loving this hope you post again today
    June 30th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • lttomz5aliy

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    aww shucks thank you! hehe
    what ace did is right, he is still a mofo though.. XD
    hmm i wonder what the avenged folks are doing...
    :D
    June 30th, 2010 at 08:41pm
  • StarBurn

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    Post again! Post again!
    June 30th, 2010 at 07:54pm
  • insanity;

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    AWWWW poor Maria so sad, Update soon!!! :)
    June 30th, 2010 at 07:54pm
  • lttomz5aliy

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    i love it!
    awesome story dude.
    ace.. smh that mofo..
    June 30th, 2010 at 02:35pm
  • silk tea.

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    This was good.
    There were a lot of rough patches and there were a bunch of grammar and spelling errors that I caught.
    So I definitely recommend getting a beta.
    Also, the layout is kind of dark and off-putting so maybe change that up a bit.
    But otherwise great job.
    June 30th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • MyMonkeySaidSo

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    Defiantly a FML moment.
    June 16th, 2010 at 11:27pm
  • moonlightray

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    Don't stop writting, there are actually alot of things you can do from this point.
    June 12th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • ohrwurm.

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    Oh gawd. I wasnt gettng updates for the chapters you put up on the prequel then saw that you had a sequel so I read all of it up and I was like holy santa claus shit! This was so unexpected, WHICH I LOVE! I am so excitited to read what'll happen next. Good job and cant wait for the update!!!
    June 3rd, 2010 at 01:14am
  • Drop_DeadM

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    Oh nice.
    I love it.
    And please don't kill maria off *Puppy dog eyes*
    <3
    June 1st, 2010 at 03:28pm
  • Drop_DeadM

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    Nice. I lave it bbyckes
    May 29th, 2010 at 01:36pm
  • MyMonkeySaidSo

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    cheap fight. Can't wait to see what you got planed for this story tho. More pwease and ice cream
    May 27th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • GlitterMonsterx3

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    ohh new update=]
    May 27th, 2010 at 03:02am
  • Drop_DeadM

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    Love :) Whats up with Maria? :O Nice. Is she a fighter to be or sumink??
    May 19th, 2010 at 04:05pm
  • GlitterMonsterx3

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    good update
    May 19th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • Drop_DeadM

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    Update please? <3
    May 13th, 2010 at 05:48pm
  • PeanutFoREVer.

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    I love your stories but can you do chapters? It makes it so much easier to read. I like your ideas though and LOVE your stories :D
    May 13th, 2010 at 07:08am
  • Alyx Khaos

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    the last story was realy good nd funny. cant wait till next chapter
    May 13th, 2010 at 04:14am
  • GlitterMonsterx3

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    looks good cant wait to see what ideas you have next =)
    May 13th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • Kezabell

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    Can't wait to read the first chapter. I hope you post it soon =)
    May 12th, 2010 at 11:03pm
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