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  • Beau Mark Bokan.

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    asjdfkl
    HOLY SHIT.
    so many twists, so many turns.
    heartbreak.
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    gah.
    this story should be published, not even joking.
    you did an excellent job.
    completely above any expectations.
    (:
    <3
    April 28th, 2008 at 07:20am
  • Ashley7X

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    Holy crap...that was amazing. I'm totally speechless.
    I cried so hard!
    You are an extremely talented writer.
    xo
    April 23rd, 2008 at 11:53pm
  • kmcgeezy

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    Awh.
    I'm sad that this is the end!
    I just about broke down in tears when Matt was visiting Zacky's grave.
    This was an amazing story though!
    =D
    April 22nd, 2008 at 10:03pm
  • ontheedge91

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    sucks that its over...i wanted to cry at the end...thats so sad...amazing story...i would cry for days if anything ever happened to them...
    April 22nd, 2008 at 09:37pm
  • Unicorn.

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    That was perfect. I started crying again, of course. It's nothing new anymore, though.

    The only question I have is, what's the song in chapter 34 called? I've never heard it before. A little off topic, but I'll never let it go if I don't know what it's called.

    Congrats on being finished, now you can start writing your other stories :]
    April 22nd, 2008 at 09:09pm
  • almost.easy

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    aww, it's finished! :(
    I loved reading this!
    it was truley touching through out the story!
    you write amazingly!

    can't wait to see more stories in the future!
    April 22nd, 2008 at 06:42pm
  • xoxo_allykat_xoxo

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    wow

    that was really hard to read

    you've got me in shacking tears right now

    that was really amazing, i cant wait to read another storie from you
    April 22nd, 2008 at 12:23pm
  • Vengeance.x

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    *cries*
    NOOOOOO
    ='[
    ahhh...

    It was amazing.
    Loved it =]

    Can't believe it's over though.. =\

    Really good and an amazing ending..
    Love xxx
    April 22nd, 2008 at 12:12pm
  • Crystalmatters

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    awh man that's beautiful lol. I really loved this story xxx
    April 22nd, 2008 at 11:16am
  • Oooh Zing

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    I can't believe it's over. :l
    I fucking loved it though. :]
    April 22nd, 2008 at 10:13am
  • BOOMshakalaka!

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    That speech at the end was amazing. :)
    April 22nd, 2008 at 09:30am
  • Oooh Zing

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    HUGS FOR MATT!
    April 22nd, 2008 at 04:29am
  • Oooh Zing

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    You're a tease, you know that? XD
    April 22nd, 2008 at 03:15am
  • Unicorn.

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    You're killing me with the suspense, my dear. And killing is not a very nice thing to do.
    April 21st, 2008 at 09:06pm
  • almost.easy

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    i love it!
    :D
    April 21st, 2008 at 07:49pm
  • ontheedge91

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    oh man...come one...i need more...this is soo good...sucks that its ending
    April 21st, 2008 at 07:37pm
  • Vengeance.x

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    omgeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    That was..
    Bloody amazing and intense.
    You did it on purpose didn't you!?!
    Left me on the edge of my seat!!
    grr @ yoo!

    okay..
    Well..
    It was an awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next, even though that brings the story closer to the end which I do not want.! =[
    woop =]
    Love it =]
    xx
    April 21st, 2008 at 06:19pm
  • Crystalmatters

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    intense or what?
    April 21st, 2008 at 06:11pm
  • BOOMshakalaka!

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    Poor Matt! Can't wait to find out how he escaped. Update soon...please?
    April 20th, 2008 at 07:16pm
  • Unicorn.

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    Awh, you're such a great writer. I'm jealous and happy for you.
    April 20th, 2008 at 04:44pm
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