Even though it isnt finished I must say,I honestly enjoy this story. I love how every chapter seems so well thought out ,not just random crap thrown together. It shows that you are a writer who puts alot of time and pride into your work. I also like how you took the time to descibe each charecter.The last few chapters made my heart ache! You know a story is good when it has the ability to do that! I really hope that Dalton and Pierce can work it out.You're probly one of my favorite writers on mibba. Keep up the good work;)
looking foward to the perfect ending...but i dont want the characters to be gone just yet :( hope everything gets alot better for you you're an amazing writer and im so glad you're keeping this story going
I was so happy when I saw this had updated! This was just so lovely. It was wonderfully written, and you did an amazing job! I'm sad that's coming to an end, because I absolutely love this story. But I can't wait for more! <3 <3 <3
that was... i have no words to describe how... perfect and...amazing and just... i don't know how to say what i'm thinking, if i'm honest. that was beautiful, and i don't want to seem weird by saying that. but it really was. personally, i've never liked smutty scenes, i've always perfered the sweet ones, short, like, a paragraph long or even the ones with the time jumps, but this one was perfect, especially for me. i don't know how to explain it, so i hope that did it. anyway. like i said before, that was amazing, easily my favorite chapter of probably any story i have ever read. it beat any competetion, without a doubt. i just thought i'd let you know.
that was amazing, and I agree, so so perfect for them :) Aww, he definitely won't be able to argue anymore. They're so adorable :) I'll be sad to see this go :( but I understand, it's gorgeous.
I absolutely love this story, its so well written, and I just can't stop saying how much I love it! It's so wonderful, and just so cute. I'm so happy they are back together! They are so perfect together, and I'm happy Hunter is out of the picture. I wanted to hit him. So bad. But he's gone, so I'm happy! :D I just love your stories, your so talented! I could just read your stories forever! Keep up the amazing work! <3