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  • averino

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    I like the last line most especially.
    :)
    July 24th, 2011 at 06:11am
  • anders.

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    -grabs dalton and pierce and hugs-
    July 24th, 2011 at 05:32am
  • atypical

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    Mmph I missed this story
    Actually I just missed your writing.
    Not very many of the super good slash writers are still updating.
    Idk man but this story is A+ because it has a plot and good character development.
    Most of the slash (or hetero) I read is smut like every other chapter.
    I admire you for that.
    It is very difficult to portray the emotions and personalities of the characters as well as you do.
    Anyway,
    Update soon!
    :)
    July 24th, 2011 at 05:20am
  • SiLenT_K

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    I loved this chapter but I know the next one will be even more great :)
    July 23rd, 2011 at 09:58pm
  • Togepenis

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    This chapter was just great! I sure am glad Hunter is out of the picture. I hope things work out for them :)
    July 23rd, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    gah I loved it!
    Come on Dalton, take a chance!!!
    can't wait to see where you take this =]
    July 23rd, 2011 at 05:22pm
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    He should listen to her. He really should. Not just because I want him and Peirce back together but for both of their happiness.
    I can't wait for the next update. I seriously wanna see what will happen.
    <3
    Love this story and love the writting.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 04:53pm
  • southpaw

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    I love how you didn't just leave the parent characters blank like so many other writers do in stories. You gave them personalities and didn't demonize them. That being said, I love the speech Mel gave to him - I hope she was able to open his eyes.
    July 23rd, 2011 at 03:38pm
  • rubba_ducky

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    aah D: it ended i just wanted to keep on reading :'( amazing update :D
    July 23rd, 2011 at 12:22pm
  • Skwahdala

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    I'm so glad Mel gave him that talking to, I feel like it was necessary
    July 23rd, 2011 at 09:52am
  • xnicolexgoesxrawrx

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    Yay! An update!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 09:24am
  • totallytasha

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    I love those two together I want them to be happy again!
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:27am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    I swear, if that boy doesn't make the right decision then I'm just going to have to hunt down a fictional character. Or if he leaves and Pierce doesn't chase after him... then... AHHH!!!!

    I love how gentle they are with each other, even now. I just feel for Pierce, he's just searching for acceptance, it's hard to find. He deserves it though. Poor dear.

    I love Mel. That one has fire. :D
    July 23rd, 2011 at 08:07am
  • th9716

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    im really liking his story so far. you are a good writer.keep it up.
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • Hot Chelle Rae

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    Woah! looks like everything is going to be awesome between dalton and pierce, YAY!!!!!!! :)
    July 5th, 2011 at 09:55am
  • xnicolexgoesxrawrx

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    <3 this is the best way to come home from 3 weeks of no Internet in Germany. Thanks for posting this and making my arrival home so lovely. I cant wait for the next chapter! :)
    July 3rd, 2011 at 03:30pm
  • matt1lema

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    *happy dances* YAYS love the chapter :D
    July 2nd, 2011 at 09:27pm
  • Make the Voices Stop

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    Yay! No more sadness :D
    Thank you for updating :) I can't wait for the next one :)
    Do you have this prewritten or are you writing this one chapter at a time? o.o
    You're an awesome writer though :)
    Drunk pierce lol he's silly but you wrote that scene really well :)
    Anywhoos please update soon :)
    July 2nd, 2011 at 08:07am
  • Visual Kei

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    Aww, I liked this chapter. I'm glad Hunter didn't like the scrapbook, and I'm glad he got his sorry ass dumped.
    July 2nd, 2011 at 06:49am
  • ElyRae

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    Hunter is such a cunt.

    I'm glad that Dalton is helping Pierce though.
    July 2nd, 2011 at 05:33am
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