July 24th, 2011 at 06:11am
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-grabs dalton and pierce and hugs-July 24th, 2011 at 05:32am
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Mmph I missed this story
Actually I just missed your writing.
Not very many of the super good slash writers are still updating.
Idk man but this story is A+ because it has a plot and good character development.
Most of the slash (or hetero) I read is smut like every other chapter.
I admire you for that.
It is very difficult to portray the emotions and personalities of the characters as well as you do.
Anyway,
Update soon!
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I loved this chapter but I know the next one will be even more great :)July 23rd, 2011 at 09:58pm
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This chapter was just great! I sure am glad Hunter is out of the picture. I hope things work out for them :)July 23rd, 2011 at 07:17pm
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gah I loved it!
Come on Dalton, take a chance!!!
can't wait to see where you take this =]July 23rd, 2011 at 05:22pm -
He should listen to her. He really should. Not just because I want him and Peirce back together but for both of their happiness.
I can't wait for the next update. I seriously wanna see what will happen.
<3
Love this story and love the writting.July 23rd, 2011 at 04:53pm -
I love how you didn't just leave the parent characters blank like so many other writers do in stories. You gave them personalities and didn't demonize them. That being said, I love the speech Mel gave to him - I hope she was able to open his eyes.July 23rd, 2011 at 03:38pm
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aah D: it ended i just wanted to keep on reading :'( amazing update :DJuly 23rd, 2011 at 12:22pm
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I'm so glad Mel gave him that talking to, I feel like it was necessaryJuly 23rd, 2011 at 09:52am
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Yay! An update!July 23rd, 2011 at 09:24am
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I love those two together I want them to be happy again!July 23rd, 2011 at 08:27am
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I swear, if that boy doesn't make the right decision then I'm just going to have to hunt down a fictional character. Or if he leaves and Pierce doesn't chase after him... then... AHHH!!!!
I love how gentle they are with each other, even now. I just feel for Pierce, he's just searching for acceptance, it's hard to find. He deserves it though. Poor dear.
I love Mel. That one has fire. :DJuly 23rd, 2011 at 08:07am -
im really liking his story so far. you are a good writer.keep it up.July 18th, 2011 at 07:02pm
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Woah! looks like everything is going to be awesome between dalton and pierce, YAY!!!!!!! :)July 5th, 2011 at 09:55am
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<3 this is the best way to come home from 3 weeks of no Internet in Germany. Thanks for posting this and making my arrival home so lovely. I cant wait for the next chapter! :)July 3rd, 2011 at 03:30pm
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*happy dances* YAYS love the chapter :DJuly 2nd, 2011 at 09:27pm
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Yay! No more sadness :D
Thank you for updating :) I can't wait for the next one :)
Do you have this prewritten or are you writing this one chapter at a time? o.o
You're an awesome writer though :)
Drunk pierce lol he's silly but you wrote that scene really well :)
Anywhoos please update soon :)July 2nd, 2011 at 08:07am -
Aww, I liked this chapter. I'm glad Hunter didn't like the scrapbook, and I'm glad he got his sorry ass dumped.July 2nd, 2011 at 06:49am
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Hunter is such a cunt.
I'm glad that Dalton is helping Pierce though.July 2nd, 2011 at 05:33am
:)