The Coffee Girl - Comments

@ ceast13
I might do that, just for fun :)

I think you should write a sequel to this story. Especially after the Stanley cups it would be awesome.

I'm not sure why I haven't commented on this. I feel like this is probably the best hockey fanfiction story I have ever read. There's just something about it. Maybe its the fact that the characters seem real and that they seem to grow and learn from things. Or maybe its that fact that the plot actually moves instead of going in circles like a lot of other Hickey fics do. They like to get with the guy get into a fight, make up and then do it again. Its very boring especially when poorly written but this, this is well written and I've fallen in love with it.
Thank you.

I don't even think I need to say how wonderful of a writer you are- but I will anyway! I think this may be one of my favorite stories, although I also very much liked "Your Guide to...". (And I'm a little sad you took it down) Keep up the amazing work!

I just commented on your profile, but I just love this story so much!!!! Just finished reading it again for the bazillionth time... It is my favorite on Mibba!

I think I've already commented maybe, maybe not but I definetely need to comment again! This is one of my favorite favorite stories on mibba and you did the Jon/Pat/Calli love triangle so well.

Like all of the other stories makes Pat such a bad guy when the girl ends up with Jon but not this one! It's a happy ending for everyone!

Awesome job!

loved for sure. :)

This story is the bomb.com :)

Aw. I just read the whole story. Loved it. :)

Hi Coffee Girl! I was searching for some Blackhawks news for the game tonight and a link to your story caught my attention. At first I wasn’t quiet sure what I was looking at and then before I know I was at the end of the last chapter!! I think you are very talented. Great writing! I felt a bit of Twilight influence in your style. Such as having a love triangle in your story, Cali’s confused personality, and the repetition of some words such as “shrug” and “chuckle” a lot. Plus Hockey players are all Vampires not the cold ones but skating on ice! All that being said I felt there was some truth to some of the things that were written in your story. I can’t pin point what but I have been around enough to realize that you actually know your characters somewhat and it is not pure imagination!! Well that’s my take anyways (I could be wrong!!) I think you should write more stories. Or even write scripts. You are really good and smart! I enjoyed your story! Keep up the good work! : ) I also felt like you might be the writer of Ms.Blackhawks blog!! Okay doesn’t matter what I think! Good luck! : )

This is really one of the best stories on Mubba. Please write more!

AHHH! I LOVE IT! Especially at the fact that Kaners my favorite player and at the end he goes with a girl named jaime! Basically because my name is Jamie just spelled differently lol :)) Really liked you should right a lot more!

Oh my gosh! I am jellysickjonas ffrom Quizilla... and I was wondering if that was the banner I made you, because I love that you used it. I didn't think it would be used on a different website. :)

And a great story, for my third time reading it :)

Best story I've read on mibba.

Great job with this story,
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:(
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I Loved it, it was beautiful, written, and just all around amazing...
But im sad its over... :(
Like extremely depressed.... Is that normal?
I loved the ending to the epilogue, it was cute, and tied up the story.
I hate for it to be ending, but I wouldn't have it any other way. !
That ending was like the icing to the cake.
You did a great job. I hope you have some other new stories soon :)

aww cute ending, loved it

i love this story !!

Gahhhh!
Sad face that it's over...but I loved the story!
Fantasmagorical job!

I meant now, sorry.