July 29th, 2010 at 05:16am
The Coffee Girl - Comments
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this chapter made ME nervous lol. loved it!July 29th, 2010 at 04:53am
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Ahhh, the ending was perfect!July 29th, 2010 at 04:37am
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definitely didn't expect the story to end already
cant wait to see what happens in the epilogueJuly 29th, 2010 at 04:31am -
I loved this. I'm so sad It's basically over, because this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Whenever I would see you updated it, I would get really excited. You're an amazing writer, and this was an amazing story. :)July 29th, 2010 at 04:23am
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Well it is about time they got together. lol
I really like this story. I don't want it to end. :(
Great work!!!July 29th, 2010 at 03:30am -
So, this is the first Jonathan Toews story I've read on this site so far and I've got to say, I absolutely love it. You're a really talented writer and you've really got a knack for making the characters seem real. Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to your future updates. :)July 28th, 2010 at 10:18am
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Update soon(: <3!!July 28th, 2010 at 08:49am
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I just read all of this,
And simply:
Love. Love. Love.
Really great writing, really great plot,
Love it!
Keep it up, :)July 26th, 2010 at 09:57pm -
LOVE IT!
keep writing :)July 25th, 2010 at 02:23am -
Love your story! i look for a new one everyday :)July 22nd, 2010 at 11:55pm
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great update :)July 21st, 2010 at 10:18pm
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Hahaha my favorite part was when jon scared malcom shitless lol...ur story keeps getting better and better!! Hope the update is soon :) <3!!!July 21st, 2010 at 05:48am
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ohh jonny...why do you have to be like that? Love it as always! :)July 21st, 2010 at 03:57am
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O.O..... Do my eyes deceive me?.... I could have sworn you put, We're getting close to the end. I must be dreaming, because... well..... that would epicly suck. :( I love this story too much to see it end!
P.S. I loved this chapter, Jonathan is being a douche, Calli is being a human, and is feeling rejected in a way.
Update Soon ~ !July 21st, 2010 at 12:29am -
will he just stop being so macho for once beejezuzJuly 20th, 2010 at 10:41pm
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I just want them to get together already, geesh! lol
great update. can't wait for more.July 20th, 2010 at 09:28pm -
Great update! His indecivness drives you crazy yet also mnakes you swoon at the same time..and it's ending soon..SAY IT ISN'T SO..hah just kidding! Keep up the great work!July 20th, 2010 at 08:45pm
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I'm glad she's not taking his bi-polar crap!
can't wait for more!July 20th, 2010 at 08:36pm -
loved it as usual! can't wait for the next update.....please make it soon?
PS jonny needs to get his act together hahahhJuly 20th, 2010 at 08:04pm
Can't wait for the epilogue :)