Burning in Water - Comments

I really loved your story and the way you've written it. It is not a usual fan fiction of ville. It gave me a lot to think about, because i too lost someone very dear to me not so long ago.
Thank you for writing. And good luck with your other stories.

There isn't one line of this story I didn't enjoy. You have talent and the people that aren't reading are seriously missing out. You've done a wonderful job in ending this. I'm not a big fan of clear cut endings. I like them to let you elaborate on it and let it flourish in your mind. So, good job sweetheart.

WHAT! Woah, that shocked me to say the least. Very good work! :D Can't wait for the end. :)

On the seventh chapter, and it's beautiful. Makes me want never to write again because I know it'll never be as good as this.
And oh, Ville doesn't have a licence.

This story deserves more comments, deary.
I loved the update. <3

Newreader. ;D
So...
I'm totally in love with this story and happy I stumbled on it.
More soon, yes?

<3

Can you still being so amazing? ;)

I really adore this past chapter. I feel it needed the length it had to get the meaning out clearly. You wrote it quite well; the feelings seeping out in a soft focus. Beautiful. Truly, truly beautiful.

I apologize for lack of comment. I've been busy with work and texting my girlfriend.
I really do adore this story. It's a safe addiction; something I know I can crave and get without the wrath of death feeding upon my being. It's deep hearted and complex. Perfection to an extent. Amazing, really.

:) This is so good. You have me addicted, sweetheart.

I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love this. The way in which you form your sentences is truly beautiful.

I loved this chapter, and I knew I would. I always look so forward to your updates. Your writing is so amazing. I adore it completely, and I'll keep telling you that until you get sick of me. XD

I figured it out! I realize why your story leaves me confused as points. It's because you're a complex writer whereas 99% of mibba is simple. I'm used to the simple styles again, sadly. Hopefully you can change that for me.
I really do love this story. It's amazing. I just adore the feelings pouring from the screen with every word read. Amazing. Pure bliss.

I've been working on a Ville slash for a while now (haven't posted it yet, though). Glad to see someone else joined the few who do.
I quite enjoy reading this. It's written really well, and I like the plot.

That is great that they are finally doing things. Like that a lot.
Thanks for updating.

very much like you story. characters and written. ville is idol for me and like how you write of him.

nice story. i like the way you write. though it is kind of confusing.....or not. ville and eino are having a thing or not????
well anyway. it is nice to see that someone still writes about ville.
keep the chapters coming.

wow! i like this chapter. can't wait to know what happens next...

i like where this is going!! <3