When It All Comes Down - Comments

So this story was weirdly addicting, and I can't wait to go read the sequel!! Your writing style is pretty solid, though I'll have a better feel for it after reading the next one <3 you are fantastic!

WARNING IM WEIRD (:
Ok so during the whole story I thought Vikki was a... Bitch. :D
I loved the story though just that I felt that Vikki was too icky (:
Heheehehehe good job (:

UM SEQUEL PLEASE.
xox

"You're the biggest fucking scum bag I've ever met. I have no fucking sympathy for you, I have no love for you, I have nothing for you. You were the worst fucking thing to ever happen to me, Gaskarth." I shook my head, my eyes welling up with tears.

"Baby, don't say t-" Her hand smacked me, a stinging, burning feeling on my cheek.

"I'm not your "baby". I'm not your "honey". I'm not your "sweetie", your "babe", I'm not your anything anymore." She pushed me one last time before pointing to the closet. "Get your fucking bags and pack up your shit before I burn it all." She spat.

I can't wait for the sequel!!!!

She finally dumps his sorry ass for good.
Can't wait for the last chapter and the sequel!

yay... Sequal :)

:OO
i dont like Lisa.
and i really dont think she should be with ronnie :')

Vikki should just go to Ronnie, and Alex should just go away. lol.

alex just had to get wasted

yes.
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awww <3
this is just NAWWW :')
i hate how Max looks right now..
*cough* HOBO *cough*

daww'h(: the ending was cute:D

Max did look like a tranny without any eyebrows..

-sigh- I feel bad for Vikki, she seems so confused.
&& she kisses Alex after she kissed Ronnie...&& uhm... yeah.... XD
Amazing payback! >=]

...Wow... :o
Wait what? I don't even...
Wow. This is almost as crazy as those six stallion ducks I saw today. Almost.
This is incredible Ashy! You're so brilliant at writing, and idea making. You suck -_- I wish I could be that awesome.
Update soon, or I will beforced to eat this spongebob cupcake...I may eat it anyways but still! xD

P.S. Hurray for mexican smileys!

Brilllllll. Awe. He finally told her! Oh my god.alex is bad :0

omg she went back to alex.

WTF!!!!...

looooove ronnie.
looooove thisstory.

Fuckin finally Ronnie looses it!
That was hot as hell... x]

OMFG!!!! wow that was awesome! alex is going to be upset. But oh well he started it!! she said she loved ronnie! omg! can't wait for the next update!