Darling, Go Where You Belong. - Comments

Yay:) Thanks for updating!

Oh hot damn, I was not expecting a sex scene haha. And congrats on a baby brother! And school is always a drag :p much love to you darling!

YEah update!!! Thanks, I liked this chapter a lot

Love this story! thanks for the update :) I missed it lol

I missed this story! I had to read a few earlier chapters to understand lol .... please update soon

I really have no problem with the story, in fact I love it! buuuutttt the first chapter kind of..threw me off. just a little bitty thing that I wasn't a fan of. the beginning was inviting and it drew me in, but some of your sentences weren't very structured and you started to explain the three types of people in the world by saying "here's what I'm going to do I'm going to explain this to you" writing is supposed to be directed out to an audience but it shouldn't ever personally interact such as you saying "let me tell you this." also, wording it like that is very..broken writing. there's other ways to smoothly lead the story up to her expaining her thoughts on people. otherwise that small detail, I really like the story!

Wow, this is lovely.

I love these photo thingys

Anyway: Loved the new uppppdate. Im so in love with this

awh! i <3 u too :) that was adorable. i cant wait for their relationship to blossom. opps. ;P

She's got a bit of a foul mouth lol
Update soon please
Marie

i like the new layout! and awh, i hope u feel better. this chapter was great, i liked it when she grabbed Max's hand. that was cute. i cant wait to see what happens next :)

I really like this story! I'm on chapter four at the moment, and I'm planning on reading chapter five soon. It's well written, and I'm curious to watch the interaction between Tess and Max unfold. I like that she's not falling all over him like the other girls, even when he's the one initiating everything.
I also liked that you linked a picture of her outfit, and that you've obviously put a lot of thought into the story, and Tess' character.
I only have one criticism to make. I don't feel that Max's dialogue fits his character. The accent sort of reminds me of Hagrid, and that's definitely not who I want to be imagining when I'm reading about this attractive English boy! The content itself is brilliant, it's just the "yeh" and such that I'm referring to. Sorry if I'm not describing this well.
However, I understand that you said yourself that you have difficulty writing English accents. My suggestion would be not to differentiate between his accent and the other characters, but continue to indicate that he does, in fact, have an accent.
That's just my opinion though. Otherwise it's great and I can't wait to read more!

Can't wait to see what happens with her and max. love the new chapter!!! Your a amazing writer :)

I adore this story. And with an ending like that I can only hope you'll update soon:)
-Marie

Real good story so far!
Can't wait to read more.

Good luck on your Mid-Terms by the way.

ah, its okay. dont stress too much. us readers will still be here when ur ready to update :)

In love <3

This story seems pretty interesting so far :)

Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wonderful! Can't wait for more! [=