Darling, Go Where You Belong. - Comments

Amazing updates!
I literally laughed out loud with hunter and the gay part

Awwww Tallulah is absolutely adorable c: I liked this chapter too! I can completely imagine her asking him if he's gay ahahaa :)

haha, asking if her mom's bf is gay, thats great XD seriously, cant wait for more.

This is reallly good. You shall write more. [=

This looks really really good so far! It's written so fluently that it's nice to read and easy to follow, not to mention it's got that ass of a big brother everyone needs <3 and don't worry about the English accent, it's quite accurate for in the South! I'm excited for an update! :)

I love this story..
I can tell it goes places..

Love the pic

I love you. & I love this already. It is really different but I like it. Keeeeeeeep goooooing :)

Hey love the story.
They are so cute together. :)
Can you please continue on with the story?
It was about to get interesting.
I'm dieing to know what happens next.

*raises hand*
meeee i liked it! i'm so pissed at alex though like wtf.. boys are stupid.
i was singing Alex and Avery sittin in a tree because like.. come on they're cute!
now i'm like wtf dumb boy avery avery avery! haha
i loved it, keep it up and such.
and it didnt suck!

I believe that your writing is as good now as it was in the beginning :]

Feedback?
hmm... I would love it if Averie and Alex got a little closer, but I understand what your setting up their relationship, so to speak. Maybe some more conflict? Not all out angst, but a few more upsets? I don't know just trying to give you what you asked for :]

I will wait for updates :D<3

she sooo wants his hot naked bod ontop of hers in a bed. haha.
i'm kinda sad that you might put this on pause for a bit, but i understand what you're saying. so hey other readers! FUCKING COMMENT!
gosh.
but yeah i really like reading this story and its just starting to get interesting since shes finally admitting to herself that hes a hottie and she likes him lol.

lol thanks for changing the font i didnt have to magnify the screen and like sit all close to read it :]
i liked this chapter too, though wtf is up with that Marie bitch.. not her house! i would be snappin haha.
and sorry about the double comment, sometimes mibba doesn't submit my comments fast enough so i click it again.. i'm too impatient and need to work on that.

i liked this chapter. only thing i didnt like was that the new fonts hard to read lol other then that update more! hahha

i liked this chapter. only thing i didnt like was that the new fonts hard to read lol other then that update more! hahha

Sorry I haven't commented for a while *shifty eyes*

But your story continues to be awesome :]
Can't wait for an update
xx

i dont like the shortness of the chapter, but i loved the content of it :]

Loving it! There are a few spelling mistakes that need to be fixed, but overall a good story. Can't wait for the next part.

First Comment?
FUCK YEAH! :D

I like this story so far, but I swear if you make the family next door vampires or some shit I'll be severely pissed. It's very promising & I'd really like for you to continue it :]

xx