Actions Speak Louder Than Words - Comments

  • Mew Aqua

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    This is amazing. It is so meaningful and beautiful. We can only dream of a love like this.
    May 28th, 2012 at 05:55am
  • xXHaleyHeartbreakXx

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    This story is absolutly beautiful. I can only dream, that oneday I will have the blessing of sharing a love so pure.
    December 26th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • Alphah

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    very impressive. I could totally feel the emotion inside my veins
    October 4th, 2011 at 11:22pm
  • Make the Voices Stop

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    This amazing :) I think this is my absolute favorite one shot! It's so passionate and loving with out dialogue, darling this is great work! It really makes me think about things differently now, in a better light that is :) just wow.
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:04pm
  • AliceSky

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    Very nice!! And oh so sweet!
    September 24th, 2010 at 02:16am
  • foxypunx

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    ~tears~ Dude, your talented.
    September 1st, 2010 at 05:57am
  • Mercy James

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    you did an amazing job on your story m'dear.
    in truth, actions do speak louder then words, but not always.
    say a parent left when you were really little, but continued to send you a card for every holiday and your birthday every year, after say 10 maybe 15 years, once you've grown up, you meet your parent...would you be mad at them still or would you accept them because they sent you all those cards?
    in that case, sometimes actions don't mean as much as words do.
    in a relationship though, it's the little things that show the person you really care. you get them small gifts just because, you hold on to them all through the night then wake smiling to see them next to you, every little action can say more then a thousand words, and that is the greates treasure one could give
    i greatly enjoyed your story
    thank you for entering my contest
    August 3rd, 2010 at 10:47am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    This is your FIRST oneshot!?
    Oh lordy.
    That was really sweet,
    and it wasn't like the rest of the mute/deaf ones that I read.
    It's unique,
    and I can't even describe it.
    I think you did a fantastic job<3
    xo
    July 7th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    this was a truly beautiful story!
    I had tears in my eyes while I was reading it :)
    the way you presented the emotions was so real and wonderfully done.

    you deserve to win that contest!
    June 14th, 2010 at 11:36pm
  • break me.

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    I think finally someone found some words to describe what loving another person means.
    This was amazing, and I'd probably read it over and over again. :)
    June 6th, 2010 at 10:34pm
  • miss monti

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    This was one of the cutest and the most beautiful things that I have read.
    I absolutely loved it :)
    June 6th, 2010 at 09:01am
  • restingplatypus

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    That was adorable!!:) I loved it. Thx for entering it!!
    June 1st, 2010 at 08:19am
  • Lets Run Wild.

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    wow that was soo cute!
    i love it <3
    and i really hope you win because that was truely amazing XD
    your a great writer
    May 22nd, 2010 at 05:06am
  • Tattoo

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    I thought this oneshot was really cute :)
    I liked how the two could show their love for one another through just their actions and no words.
    May 22nd, 2010 at 02:30am
  • breaking.the.chains

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    this was so amazing
    it's really toughing and adorable.
    i love it < 3
    May 21st, 2010 at 11:01am
  • adoration

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    This was beautiful.
    May 21st, 2010 at 07:34am
  • Dimitri Doll

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    That is truly amazing and so true. It was simple but extremely touching.
    May 21st, 2010 at 06:32am
  • littlemisslonely

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    That was so beautiful. Seriously. It was truly amazing.
    May 21st, 2010 at 05:56am
  • boyking

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    Oh, wow. I don't even know what to say to make this comment decent enough to describe how amazing this was.

    Seriously, you're an amazing writer: the descriptions, the word choices, and how the words flow together. You captured the emotions and love between them perfectly. I really hope you win, because if you don't; Gah, I don't even know. Even the layout and character pictures were good choices, too.
    May 21st, 2010 at 05:12am
  • matthuee.

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    I love thisā™„
    It was so sweet, so meaningful. Good job.
    May 21st, 2010 at 01:08am