This amazing :) I think this is my absolute favorite one shot! It's so passionate and loving with out dialogue, darling this is great work! It really makes me think about things differently now, in a better light that is :) just wow.
you did an amazing job on your story m'dear. in truth, actions do speak louder then words, but not always. say a parent left when you were really little, but continued to send you a card for every holiday and your birthday every year, after say 10 maybe 15 years, once you've grown up, you meet your parent...would you be mad at them still or would you accept them because they sent you all those cards? in that case, sometimes actions don't mean as much as words do. in a relationship though, it's the little things that show the person you really care. you get them small gifts just because, you hold on to them all through the night then wake smiling to see them next to you, every little action can say more then a thousand words, and that is the greates treasure one could give i greatly enjoyed your story thank you for entering my contest
This is your FIRST oneshot!? Oh lordy. That was really sweet, and it wasn't like the rest of the mute/deaf ones that I read. It's unique, and I can't even describe it. I think you did a fantastic job<3 xo
this was a truly beautiful story! I had tears in my eyes while I was reading it :) the way you presented the emotions was so real and wonderfully done.
I think finally someone found some words to describe what loving another person means. This was amazing, and I'd probably read it over and over again. :)
Oh, wow. I don't even know what to say to make this comment decent enough to describe how amazing this was.
Seriously, you're an amazing writer: the descriptions, the word choices, and how the words flow together. You captured the emotions and love between them perfectly. I really hope you win, because if you don't; Gah, I don't even know. Even the layout and character pictures were good choices, too.