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  • Recyclable

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    Wow, this was probably the most brilliantly written story I've ever read. Your style of writing is pure perfection! I wish I had your talent!

    Hope I'll be able to read many more stories written by you! =)
    February 21st, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • flesh and blood

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    You amaze me every time. <3 The ending could not have been written any other way, it was just perfect. I'm hoping for a new story sometime, yeah? (:
    October 1st, 2010 at 01:33am
  • Grey Horizon

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    wow. That was painfully wonderful ! I really don't know what i should say other than it's beauiful...
    The ending and the sudden turn of events and Thom's struggle, his feelings and emotions made me feel like i'm part of the story feeling what he feels and idk it's just beautiful beautiful beautiful :O Well done with this story and thank u for sharing it with us :D
    September 29th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • Naked_Zombie

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    The endind was perfect. I don't think I could enjoy it as much if it were any other way.
    I love the struggle throughout this story. How real it seems compared to others. Really pulled on my heart
    September 27th, 2010 at 11:45pm
  • youcanholdmyranch

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    I fell in love with this story at the first chapter. I'm sad I didn't get to experience the anxiety of waiting for you to update, but I loved it none the less. Though it took me until the middle of chapter twelve to realize that you live on the other side of the world, with your Christmas in the summer and whatnot hah.
    September 27th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • understand

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    this is so exceptionaly beautiful
    i don't think i can find the words to describe the way it made me feel
    it was so real and so full of emotion
    September 26th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • xxxbreelynn

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    <3<3<3

    I can't really say anything other than I loved it.
    September 26th, 2010 at 06:22pm
  • going...going...GONE

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    This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read, not only on this site but in general and I'm not even joking.
    You have an amazing style and I liked that throught the whole thing you could really feel what the characters we're feeling.
    You did a great, great job on this, well done.
    September 26th, 2010 at 04:47pm
  • allie_jane_

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    this is perhaps the most beautiful story i've ever read. really really well done :)
    September 26th, 2010 at 12:51pm
  • Pertisimo

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    That was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story :]
    I loved it, and I'm so glad you let them make themselves a happy ending!
    September 26th, 2010 at 11:35am
  • Everyone's Dead

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    Magnificent.
    Everything you write makes me want to cry, it's all so amazing.
    And I feel like a creep for commenting on like every single thing you write, but dammit.
    I can't help myself.
    This story was wonderful.
    September 26th, 2010 at 09:03am
  • Naked_Zombie

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    There was tears in my eyes....

    My god this has to be my favorite story
    September 8th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • WARNING: NO DIVING!

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    Like so many others have said, I got a little emotional. I love your work. I feel as your characters do.

    I would have to say you are my favorite writer on here. You never fail to captivate me with your words.
    September 4th, 2010 at 12:39pm
  • flesh and blood

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    Boy oh boy. I'm in love. Keep doing what you're doing, because it's brilliant.
    August 28th, 2010 at 08:06pm
  • Grey Horizon

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    Heyy :]
    As I Said Before I LOVE This And I'm Now On Chapter 9 =)
    I Can't Wait To Finish Reading It All <3 I Love The Characters And Everything That Goes In This Story. It's Definitely Different And It's Kinda Rare To Find Such Beautiful Writings On Here .. It's Not Cliche Like Other Stories .. Keep It Up :)
    August 26th, 2010 at 09:25pm
  • GreyHorizon

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    WOW !! :o
    Im New To Mibba And I Just Read This And Wow
    I Love The Way You Write How U Describe The Little Details :D
    Keep It Up And UPDATE plzzzz ?? :$
    August 23rd, 2010 at 12:30pm
  • CatchingOrigami

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    i read it all. i even read every single comment, so desperate was i to keep reading.
    i dont think ive ever cried at a book before, let alone half finished ones. i wonder if thats unusual? probably not.
    i would attempt at giving you criticism, but truly. i can not think of anything whatsoever. you write so beautifully, that words actually cant explain it. its as if your writing is raw. i dont know. i dont even know why im still talking. perhaps i shall shut up. but maybe not. who knows? i'll whisper to myself about how amazing you are, and how beautiful thomas is and everything else. i know that my dreams will be interesting tonight. thankyou. i cant wait for the next chapter :]
    August 2nd, 2010 at 11:22pm
  • flesh and blood

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    If this doesn't have a happy ending, I think I'll probably cry myself to sleep from now on.
    July 25th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • tyrannosarahrex

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    you write so beautifully.
    I'm absolutely in love with your writing.
    this story is enchanting, and I cannot wait for more :)
    July 12th, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • sweepingly

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    Aaah, this is just lovely.
    July 12th, 2010 at 03:18pm