He's attractive, arrogant and invincible. Well, for now. - Comments

I really like your story. It is truly amazing. I feel so bad for Ever. I don't know what to say. Adam is a cutie and perfect for Ever. I hope Adam truly stays with Ever through thick and thin. Please update!

- LaLa <3

I really like your story! =D just wanted to let you know. Update soon plz!!

Multiple personalities? Shocking.
I didn't see it coming with Ever's parents' death.

Totally didn't see it coming. So what is Charlie May going to do?

Wow! The lastest chapter really made me blush. It was hilarious when he ran away. What kind of playboy does that?

Awww...What a sweet moment. It makes me feel like the calm before a storm.

It made me laugh when Adam fell off his chair.
I didn't know a boy could be so cute when he's in love. Getting red just because he kisses Ever.
Very nice!
I noticed I'm the only one to comment on here. May be you could use a layout so it is more appealing. People are shallow like that.

Ever is such a sweetheart.
I don't understand the "half of the year" thing. Can you clarify?

Oh My God!!!! I'm shocked. She has short-span memory!

I just read the first chapter and thought it was amazing.
To be honest, I was hooked when I started reading the summary. "On a hunt", "On the brink of extinction". Nice playing on words.
Your writing style is very fresh, too. Very easy to read and I can really understand Adam better.
Write more!