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  • xoxomusic363

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    Gosh, I just read this, and I loved it ;) YOu are such an amazing writer. Seriously :) :D :P
    June 29th, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • I've got hope.

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    Loved thissss :)
    June 22nd, 2010 at 07:04pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    CUTE CUTE CUTE! I'm super glad that he didn't end up marrying that othergirl and went with hwe =) Loved it!!
    June 21st, 2010 at 06:31am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    CUTE CUTE CUTE! I'm super glad that he didn't end up marrying that othergirl and went with hwe =) Loved it!!
    June 21st, 2010 at 06:31am
  • dreamerforever

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    I loved how that ended!
    June 21st, 2010 at 06:28am
  • Renee Says;

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    Loved it sweetie!
    June 20th, 2010 at 08:15am
  • powerplay58

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    this is Amazing<3
    please update soon!
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    oh my god! LOVE it! Jordan's a goof <3 love him for it though and awe I love Max <3 Geno made me laugh :P and I can't see Captain Kid actually cheating at anything, but the idea of Billy having him in a head lock is hilarious! I usually love Tanger, but he's being a dick :P
    June 2nd, 2010 at 08:01am
  • penschick8771

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    i love it
    hopefully she ends up staying
    please update soon
    May 29th, 2010 at 05:48pm
  • plastikhearts

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    Haha Jordan made me laugh.
    this was great, can't wait to see how it ends!
    <2+1
    May 29th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • edie_andtherockers

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    roy, this is really really good. i can't wait for the next part. keep it up.
    May 29th, 2010 at 12:48am
  • MissKrissy90

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    Awwh ):
    Can't wait for number three!
    <3
    May 28th, 2010 at 01:28pm
  • Renee Says;

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    Amazing.
    Can't wait for number three!
    May 28th, 2010 at 07:55am
  • awakeandunafraid!

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    Hahaha, Jordan made me laugh. I love this, can't wait for the final part :)
    May 28th, 2010 at 07:18am
  • ballerina613

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    so great! I can't wait for the next part...I hope kirs realizes what an idoiot he is before it's all to late!
    May 28th, 2010 at 06:31am
  • skizzle

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    cannot wait to see what happens in the third part!
    May 28th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • ninaclare

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    So I thought this was a one-shot and about died when I read the ending, then I read your note and was able to breath again. And lemme just say, that picture of Kris is lethal. That French-Canadian is too damn good looking for his own good and could probably cause traffic if that picture were on a billboard somewhere. Haha!! Oh, by the way, I really enjoy it if you couldn't tell :]
    May 22nd, 2010 at 05:34am
  • kayla96

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    Love it. .update soon!!! :)
    May 22nd, 2010 at 01:49am
  • dreamerforever

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    So far, so amazing!
    May 20th, 2010 at 08:04pm
  • KayelleMcClive

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    Max is rotten.. but such a smart boy.

    I really like this so far. I see a few things I might change but you're on the right track doll

    Hope to see more soon
    May 20th, 2010 at 06:24pm
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