July 26th, 2010 at 05:25am
omfg, so i randomly came across your ff, and i was like wth haha i love love loved it! omfg it's 3:45 in the morning, and i'm staying up to read the sequel haha but i freaking love it, can i say that enough times? lol
i was also like ahhhhh! totally random but my name is Lindsay too, my best friend just moved away, her name isn't Alice, but her dogs name is lol and when John gives her the ring with the sapphires in it...i was like what the heck?! my birthday is in September too (so many coincidences lol) ok shutting up now, but seriously hands down one of the best ff i've ever read!
I couldn't stop reading it! I finished it without tearing my eyes away from the computer screen even once. It was really good. (:
It was a really cute story and I thought it would be pretty predictable but I loved all the twists you put in it! You always have AWESOME imagery. The parts that stood out the most to me was when John found her in the rain and they were "fighting" and I could picture them trying to talk over the rain but yet trying to stay under control. And I think my favorite was when John woke up the next morning and he saw her in his black shirt playing the coffee maker. That was just soo cute (:
I'm running to go read the sequel!
-Emily