January 30th, 2012 at 02:43pm
I Can't Stay Away - Comments
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Hi hi, I like the story. The idea kind of reminds me of the story I'm currently writing hahaha except different. Anyways, my only suggestion is spacing the paragraphs a little better. It's kind of mushed together and whatnot, sorry if you don't like constructive critism... I wasn't meaning to be rude or anything. From a writer to another. You know? Well good luck with the story! <3October 26th, 2010 at 06:54pm
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cool im glad u like it 2 =)June 20th, 2010 at 08:55pm
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i like this one too! :)June 20th, 2010 at 08:16pm
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Omg, cuuuuuuute :3
I'm really sorry, but I have _no_ ideas ):June 18th, 2010 at 12:20am -
umm for ideas you could always try to get her close to one then have jake appear or you could try having jake coming sooner and make the other guys jelous and try to win her over just ideas if you like one go ahead and use it :D have fun!June 17th, 2010 at 11:50pm
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I'll try 2 post more as soon as I can!! =)June 17th, 2010 at 05:05am
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thanks so much 4 the comments!!June 17th, 2010 at 05:04am
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like it i absolutly fricking LOVE it keep writing plz plz plz i'll love you forever and im serious :DJune 14th, 2010 at 12:55am
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Looooove it so far.
please update soon.
go check out my story plzzzzzzJune 2nd, 2010 at 04:05pm -
i like this story plz update sooooooooonnnnnnnnnnMay 21st, 2010 at 05:32am
Update soon please!