Hells Fallen Angels - Comments

Woot great ending!! Weird but great can't wait for the sequel

Aaalright, I'm gonna comment here before I start reading the first chapter of the sequel...
Holy....fuck....
Now, that's some drama point to end the story
Damn, pregnant?
Johnny better stay with Eliza, or I'm gonna hurt his short ass
Hm, they could just say that Johnny is the father or something
And Jimmy could just help with the baby
I wonder what's going to happen with Leana's betrayal
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Love it, such a weird ending

Aw, Zacky is such a sweetie
Those two, Eliza and him, are exactly the support that Ali needs to come through this
They won't judge with what happened
Hopefully this not being able to have babies won't affect her relationship to Zacky
It's only a rare thing that she will be able to have babies, but maybe they'll manage all of that together
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Poor girl. :( she's all beat up. Zacky is such a sweetie!! I love this story:)

Oh, wow, so Leana betrayed her?
Poor Ali....she had to go through all that shit
But at least they really got in there and got her out now
I'm definitley really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Sweet update!! Poor Leanna :( can't wait for more :D

I loved it again more soon?

Love it! More soon?

Oh, damn, this is going to be intense
If she really follows that note, she's just gonna walk into a trap
I'm definitley excited to see what's going to happen
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

I really like this story!! Hope there is more soon! :) zacky and syn with guns would be hot!!

Oh my damn, totally loving the update
Fuuuck, it's Eliza's father who got her?
Whoa, I didn't expect either Val or Michelle to blow up the way they did
But finally someone's taking actions
Cause Michelle was right, they sat there and waited for something when they definitle could do something on their own
Haha and she's got Zacky and Brian with her, who are armed
Hopefully they'll be able to get Ali out of there
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Ps. You should read once more over this, there are a few grammar mistakes. and is it normal that there are so many spaces through out the story? Just say that you should read over it once more :)

I loved it. More soon?

Oh. My. Fucking. Christ...
I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!
UPDATE SOON!

Heyyyyy!! I just checked out your stories, and ya know what ? I looooove it ;)

and didnt you say you liked Avenged sevenfold ?

Well, I do too ;) so cheeers ! its suppperrrr :) <3

Oh my fucking god....I really didn't expect that Antonio was the one who took Ali
But now that I think of it, it makes sense that it was him
Damn, now Eliza is pissed of.....Antonio not only took one, but two things that belong to Eliza, her best friend and her brother
She definitley has a shit load of explaining to do when this is over
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next
Hope you update soon :)

I still love it babe even if it's short. More soon?

Chuck's a fucking pervert.....Ali and Eliza need to find a way to get out of there soon
And now Ali seems to have gotte kidnapped.....this is getting more and more intense
I really can't wait to see what's going to happen and who was the guy with Ali
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Love it. Chuck is such a pervey asshole. More soon?

Aww, although I expected it to be Antoio, I'm glad that it was Kyle in the end.....
I think it's kinda funny that Kyle himself is intimiated by the guys because the character you chose to be kyle is not really that scrawny either
It's really great that Eliza is following her heart now
I didn'T expect Eliza to be a virgin
I wonder how Johnny is going to react
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)