Hells Fallen Angels - Comments

I knew it! I liked this one More soon?

Poor Zacky. Love it More soon?

Haha, that was really amazing
I think that Zacky made the right choice though
He stopped Ali before she'd regret anything in the morning
She knows she's attracted to Zacky
I can't wait to see if Ali will let Zacky in
I'm really looking forawed for more
Hope you update soon :)

Myyyy goodness!
I loooveee this so much(:

Still loving it :) and I have no clue about the whole door thing...

Holy hot damn......
I bet Jimmy had a fucking field day, when he saw his girlfriend going at it with another girl
There was a really tiny mistake hun. When you changed in Johnny's POV the very first sentence, After we got to home, Leana, Eliza and Michelle were a giggling mess and Eliza and Leana were singing a very good version of Eye of the Tiger. you used Eliza's and Leana's name two times, thought you'd like to know.
That must have been so emberassing for Eliza that Jimmy showed it to the other guys
Hm i have three persons in mind that could be at the door, Johnny her brother and Antonio. I don't know if you want to have some drama coming up, but I bet it's Antonio.
I'm really looking forward for more
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Hot Damn. Poor Eliza. I bet you it's either Johnny or her brother.

This is amazing. can't wait for more!!

This is so fucking awesome
Haha, Michelle is so darn adorable, being all blushy and such
I think that deep down Ali wishes for having someone to love
I mean she's 'jealous' because her friends are having someone and she doesn't
Zacky's really sweet though, being really persistent that nothing can stop him from liking her
I wonder how Ali is going to repsond
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Yay! I've been waiting for you to update!

I don't know if I should do this...comment on our co-write...but I AM SO DOING ANYWAYS..
love it girly...so glad you are back

Love it. =D

I love this :) keep going!

Darn that was awesome :)
Seriously Jimmy, Leana and Eliza dry fu**ing on the dance floor was hot
The tattoo is really awesome too :)
Ah, I would think of it as a fatal mistake
Just pretty disastric
I actually don't remeber who Antonio is, my bad
I'm really looking forward for more
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lol threesome on the dance floor.

That chapter was really awesome
Haha xD Brian, Brian most of the time you may get girls this way
But we're talking about Ali and Eliza here ;)
I bet the look they were giving him was something like this -> O_o
Ohhhh, Zacky and Ali are going out for a smoke together
I really wonder what those two will talk about
I'm really looking forward for more
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Devil's Daughter - Silvertide

Haha that was a fucking awesome chapter
So now the two girls and the boys the others names
Haha, I guess that reaction of Zacky's action was totally understandable ;)
Hm, I wonder what you'll choose for a tattoo. I couldn't give you a good tip either
I wounldn't have a clue either
I'm really looking forward for more
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O_o Holy fuck it was Chuck's........
Darn, I totally didn't expect that one...
Seriously, i really hope that she will be able to have children in the future
And i really hope that she will be able, like Val and Mich already said, to get her life on top
Maybe a man in her life will be great solution to that
I'm really looking forward for more
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Oh that was seiously totally unexpected
She lost her unborn baby......I assume that it was Charlie's child.....
If she'd know that she already met Zacky.......and Matt
I think it's great that she has Mich and Val as support
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)