Nothing Left Now. - Comments

That was amazingly sad... I could feel your character's emotions so bluntly. I have to say: I thought he was going to have sex with the drug dealer. Not kill himself. So sad... the description was great... -sigh...- That's gonna stick with me...

Wow, that was really sad. But your description of everything was absolutely stunning!

This actually made me cry. No story on Mibba has ever made me cry before. In your story, I could feel his emotions swelling up inside my heart, his pain and his hurt. Everything. I could relate with them, too, which made the story all the more better. God, you're such a great writer. Every little description and every simple line made the whole story a story. I am so glad I read this. It's like one of those stories that makes you remember. Well, for me anyway. It helps ease the pain while reading pain. And you described pain extremely well.

I loved this story so much. It was brilliant, everything about it was beautiful. Just the fact that Declan committed suicide was beautiful. The way he was thinking every word you wrote, without it being italicized. You just knew it was in his thoughts, describing everything that was going on in his mind, his heart and the rest of the world. It was just... amazing. I would be speechless if I didn't just write all of this.

I haven't read anything on Mibba with such power. This was one of the best things I've read on this site.

I'm happy that you entered this story. It was so very... sad, and moving.
In a way, I can relate to the main character and in other ways, I can't. Your banner fit the theme of the story beautifully and I love how you completed the story with the guy dying. (Morbid, no?)

Thank you for entering!

I like it. (:

Actually I really adored the beginning and how everything was missing. I really loved that you put a lot of description into this.

The fridge was still stocked, but only with the things I ate. I raised an eyebrow at this. Where are you?
That line stuck out. I can't imagine why. (;
This story literally tugged on my heart strings- I have a horrible stomach ache, now.
Sigh . . .
It was so sad.
Tears are currently burning my eyes. "-.-
It was just . . . Terribly sad, but wonderfully written. (:
<3

Thats was an amazing story. Im sad about how it ends but besides that it was wonderful.

That was heartbreaking. I think its an overdone plot, but it never fails to get me.
Like bella said the layout was a bit irksome, I'd prefer if you made the actual text bedding wider. I think its just too long to have that narrow a layout, yeah? It was incredible though, well done. :)

Very sad, but good. A bit on the long side, but I didn't detect any major issues.
The layout was a bit irksome, I had to click custom layout. I don't like white text on black background when it's so long. Other than that good.

fml
your amazing. id love to be able to write like that.
that was beautifully done. not over done. and nothing left behind.
words can only start to describe
xo

Wow. This was absolutely stunning. I definitely felt how lonely Declan felt. His pain, his frustration... His what if's. Even I felt lonely while reading this. You made me break down into tears the moment I read that the toothbrush was gone. Your writing is absolutely amazing. I loved every single word and sentence of this. Congrats on the third place.

Ah, I love this.
You describe everything so awesomely (is that a word?)
But I really like it :D

I really haven't started this yet. I've only seen the banner, but I'm already pulled in. XD

Okay, I just finished it and...wowww. o.o I...just wow.
Emotions were portrayed fantastically.
Descriptions were marvelous.
WOW.
It was so sad, I almost cried, yo. I actually have tear on my cheek right now.

Wow.
Just...wow.
That was written so fantastically, I think my mind is actually blown. :o
The way you convey the rawness of painful emotions just twisted my heart.
I don't even have enough words to say to express how much I loved this. :)
You would have won first place in my contest, no doubt. :D

I suppose I underestimated you;
I didn't think it'd be that sad.
But..
Sad or not,
You're an amazing author.
You had a way of conveying how Declan felt when he entered the apartment, without ever actually stating what he felt. I notice that most authors can't do that. You have excellent word choice as well.
So kudos,
also 10 cool points cause the setting was in New York.

This was so awesome...I just really liked it. You have good writing, and super good potential, keep up the good work.
P.s- I almost cried:(

Congratulations. You won third place in my contest. (:
I'll link your profile + this story on my profile. Send me another one-shot/poem you want me to comment. :3

Wow, that was so amazingly written, and I almost cried. ):
I really want to know what happens next, ahah. You did such a fantastic job with all the details and emotions.
Great job and good luck in the contest. :3

this was amazing- so sad, but still so great

Amazing :) Really good, so sad though xx