Learning to Love June - Comments

This is beautifully written. [:
I'm so jealous of your talent. XD
Please update soon! I'm looking forward to it! :D

I cant wait to see where this story is going

I love this story!! I should really comment more often since it's actually like the only story I'm keeping up with :P
UPDATE SOON!!! :D

Your fillers are so beautiful that I can't even begin to describe to you their beautifulness. Jesus, Emily. I have NO idea where you pull this from but my god it's breathtaking, every last word of it.

In reply to your question, no, I do not think you can make someone love you. However, I do agree with Becky: it is 100% possible to show people that you can convince someone that you're worth loving.

In fact, that was my favorite line of the chapter. I can't explain it but it really captured my attention and made me think. Becky's very insightful :)

Hmmmmmm *raises eyebrow.........i REALLY like this story em!
and as for "Can you make someone fall in love?"
I think that in the case of setting someone up for example
you can make suggestions and get them interestd perhaps
of course once u can get the person interestd it is up to both ppl to keep them interestd so that they may go out or smthing then love comes later hopefully
so, i dont think that you can make someone fall in love but i DO think that you can make two ppl interestd in each other....u kno wat i mean :D

I don't care it was a filler... I liked it none the less!!!
anyway, I don't think you can make someone love you.... it seems like you force him.
no, I agree with becky: you can make someone realise you're worth loving!!XD

and you? what do you think?

I really enjoy this story! <3
It just seems...so real!
Keep updating. (:

PS. My first name is June!

Loved the update! You kind of let us know a little bit more about June's parents. :) I loved how she was looking around for Kellan at the car; it just shows how much more she likes him there with her. :) Hm... that's kind of a tough question. But I'm going to have to say no; because you can't force someone to love you unless they really are, and if you are able to, well, you don't know if the other person is lying about it or not. Anyways, overall, loved the update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Well, you can't really MAKE someone love you,
but you can try pretty hard to make it happen. :)

I LOVED THE UPDATE, even though it was short.
Can't wait to read more of the story, my love :D

no, haha, i can definitely not do that. im too shy :)
oh and by the way, i loved the chapters :)

i love this story so much.
i dont think you can make someone love you.
it comes to you naturally.

LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT<3

You make me want to cry my eyes out, Emily. This story, the writing, the emotions you put into it--it takes my breath away. Never in my life have I felt what I'm feeling right now. I feel...proud. Not that I haven't felt proud before, but this is a new kind of proud. You took my story as an inspiration and molded it into a completely different story. Just knowing that I inspired this wonderful piece of work is something in itself, but along with that, the fact that you're doing it so well, what with the ideas and the thought you've been putting into this, I can't even explain how much that means to me. This is absolutely marvelous, Emily. I simply cannot wait for more.

aww, i love kellan... can I marry him??

ps. I really like the new layout!

Loved the update! Aw, I thought it was cute how Kellan came over to her during school, and how she was all nervous. :) And I have a feeling some more drama is going to ensue. Can't wait to see what happens next. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Oh, and I love the new layout. :)

Love the new layout and I most def. love the new chapter!

OMFGGGGGGg

This is my first original and I LOVE it!!!:D
Please please please update soon!! :D

Oh man, this is such a good story! It's very classic and original and that's what I like about this story.
I love how Kellan and June are the 'outcast' siblings. (I like the fact that Kellan's the quite brother-- mysterious, nawmeen?)

I love the way you discribe things, especially in chapter two, "My Perfect Sister" I love the way you discribe Jessica and June.

"I know that when I wake up, I’ll still just be June and that I won’t ever be Jessica.'

Probably my favorite line. I don't know why.

Anyways, grammar/spelling is good. Just small mistakes like when you're trying to say/write "Me" you accidently wrote "My" But that's okay because I do it ALL the time. Proof read and you're all set!

Great story, I can't wait till the future chapters (:

:D I really enjoyed the update, keep it up!! <3