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  • M1295

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    Are you still going to write the sequel to this?
    August 25th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • Kaly18

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    Quite the twists and turns - never expected her secret to be that. How sad and devastating. Oh Jon!
    September 17th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • Hola1123

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    its been SOOOOO long since i've read this!!
    *sighs heavily* KILL JENN OFF!!!! lol......seriously....
    nahh, just kidding, BUT OMYGOSHNESS!!!
    *smh* its horrible....................
    CANT WAIT 4 THE SEQUEL!!!!
    March 6th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • hockey_princess23

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    I loved this story and I can't wait for the sequel
    February 15th, 2011 at 05:52pm
  • NMT82

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    Fantastic story. Great job! I really enjoyed it.
    February 15th, 2011 at 08:15am
  • Jess851

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    What a great story! I'll be reading the sequel for sure :)
    February 14th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • missann10

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    I loved the story and can not wait for the sequel!
    February 14th, 2011 at 08:26pm
  • happygirl199

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    loved the ending cant wait for the sequel!!!!
    February 14th, 2011 at 02:24pm
  • no.one.is.home

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    If Ara needs any help taking that Jen bitch down, let me know ;) revenge is my strong point too. Jon's an idiot, but he'll get her back, most likely, even if he might not deserve it.
    February 14th, 2011 at 09:52am
  • No Soup For You

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    Great new chapter even though it's the last. Can't wait for you to update the sequel
    February 14th, 2011 at 07:03am
  • Blue Line Fever

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    Okay, so this last chapter would definitely be my favorite in the whole story! I totally forgot you where writing a sequel, and i was like "No, this can't be the end, THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER!!!!"
    Anyways i've subscribed to your sequel, hopefully Jenn chokes and dies between now and the first chapter... just saying.

    Also... I didn't in the last chapter till Jon cried... something about boys crying does that to me!
    February 14th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • M1295

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    Ugh! Jon is an asshole for spending time with Jenn and ignoring his girlfriend! And Jen is a bitch for doing that to Arabella! I legit can't wait for the sequel. Revenge is sweet. I hope you can start the sequel soon!!!
    February 14th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • AliNicTem

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    Omg jonathan!!!! U horrible man!!!! Nooo they can not break up!!! More please :D
    February 14th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • chakalosa

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    omg i fell in love with this story ,it great
    good job and update soon please:D
    February 14th, 2011 at 02:08am
  • no.one.is.home

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    That was kind of a douche thing to do, Mr. Toews. I thought you were better than that. Being a Lady is over rated, A, going psycho in French, now we're talking.
    February 13th, 2011 at 04:43am
  • LDW Choice

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    I sat here and read the entire story posted to find out that there's only one more chapter until the sequel!!!!! wow, i can't wait for the final and then the sequel. I'm in love with this story! you are an amazing writer of the blackhawks. oh and i think jon is being very stupid in the last chapter posted!
    February 13th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • missann10

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    Oh man! I hope it works out for the best, maybe. I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon!!!
    February 12th, 2011 at 05:45pm
  • ninia

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    Great story
    Can't wait to see what happens next
    Plz update soon
    February 12th, 2011 at 04:38pm
  • M1295

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    No!!! They can't break up! I hope they work everything out! Please update as soon as possible!!
    February 12th, 2011 at 04:01pm
  • Jess851

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    :) I liked this chapter! Can't wait for the next
    February 12th, 2011 at 02:57pm
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