Between Two Lungs - Comments

Geez Marc, couldn't even give her a chance to explain? At least you didn't walk in on her using the drugs. She's getting clean.

Jordan...calling...Marc...explaining...not good xDD Marc's gonna be even more pissed probably.

I'm so glad she's clean :) :D :P I'm so happy for her :) and Marc........ugh. He's supportive. *note sarcasm. I'm glad Jordy is there for her :) I love this story so much :) :) :) :D :D:D :P :P :P

Ohh!! Marc is gonna beat the shit out of Jordan soon, isn't he?
Can't wait for the next one!

And empowering, don't forget empowering xo

No more gasping for a breath!

I love this story, the title enticed me at first, but it is well written and very cute xo

great story!

I can't wait to see where this is going!
It's sweet that Jordan's there to help and support her with everything.
Loved it!

So ggggoooooooodddd [:

I'm glad Jordan is there for her!
More soon

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Too cute, too cute. :) I love that she cut stupid Gary and his drug buddies off. :) I'm proud of her. And Jordy is too cute ;) Love this :) :D :P :) :D ::P :) :D :P

That was sweet right at the end!
Lovely stuff!

aiya! Things are getting good...I wonder how Marc will react when he finds out about Mae and Jordan...poor Marc.

even thought i LOVE that she's with jordan,
i cant help but feel a little bit bad for Marc,
when is she going to tell him?
i hope there wont be a bro fight.

Loved it!
More soon

Gary is an ass! She should be proud of herself for standing up to him!
Clearly this isn't even close to ending, you said it yourself so please let us find out what other twists and turns there are super quickly.
AS in, more please!!

DUUUUUUDE.
thank you for making her decide to quit and go to rehab!
and for standing up to Gary!
i was worried she would give in.

Awh, I'm so proud of her!
I hate Gary..
More soon!!

great update, love this story!!!

haha and if only it was just 12 hr bus ride from Tbay to NY ... i make the thunder bay trip (not from nyc but more north east) and just driving yourself with no stops it would probably be a 25/26 hr trip or so.
if only it was 12!!! lol.

anyways, love this and looking forward to next chap!

Yay Mae!
You're finally getting help.

I wonder if she'll ever tell Marc she slept with Jordan.

I think the general consensus is that it's not a good idea to be sleeping with your boyfriend's brother in their parents' house. Way to go there, Mae!

Anyway, I loved it. And her painting sounded pretty.

More soon, please!